Daystar

Daystar – 7-29-24 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Daystar Dawn births David’s promise in my heart where your pure love abides Aroma of Emmanuel, Morning's Star, God with me, The Word Yahweh’s welcome, eternal teddy bear with arms opened wide Sweet Lamb of God, miracles of sacrifice your watchword Tender shepherd you gather this headstrong lamb with parables of life Alpha and Omega, you rebuke all my midnights, Redeemer of my stubborn heart – you sow in me Christ’s light

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/19/2024 1:48:00 PM

glorious write about your relationship with God...congrats on your fine win and thanks for your visit, Sam!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/19/2024 8:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for your words that are so inspiring, Nette, and for your congratulations. What an opportunity this contest provided for these wonderful poems to be written. Sending you blessings of the morning star.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/17/2024 7:02:00 PM

So gorgeous. I love this a lot especially the end line. Thank you so much for sharing and Big Congrats on your first place win my deares poet friend Sam! God bless you always and your writing. Sorry for the late visit dear. So busy all the time. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your sweet thoughts. Have a wonderful day in sunshine! Hugs

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/17/2024 6:15:00 PM

You highlight many names for our Lord Jesus, He is indeed the Dawning of a new life for all who trust Him, the Daystar. Congratulations on a fine tribute to our Christ and kudoes on your win, Sam.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/20/2024 12:10:00 PM

Hi Reason! I am deeply grateful for your lovely response, your congratulations. Thank you! I have always loved the name of Jesus as the Bright and Morning Star and Radiant Dawn. This contest was an amazing opportunity to meditate on the many, wonderful, names of Jesus and to express praise. Sending you all the blessings of the Bright and Morning Star!!

Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/17/2024 5:05:00 PM

"Tender shepherd you gather this headstrong lamb..." such a relatable line. Alpha and Omega, in fact does rebuke the midnights. There is a lot packed into this poem of yours, and with that, congratulations on your win in my contest.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/19/2024 8:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Miranda not only for your beautiful response, your placement, but for this beautiful theme that so inspired me, and so many others, and these words. I am grateful and send you my heartfelt thanks. Sending you blessings and congratulations to all of the winners and their glorious work.

Karen Jones

Date: 8/4/2024 10:42:00 AM

This is beautiful! I love the last lines “Alpha and Omega, you rebuke all my midnights, Redeemer of my stubborn heart – you sow in me Christ’s light”

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/4/2024 5:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, Karen. What a joy to explore the many names of the Morning Star. I am so glad it brought joy to you. What a blessing. Sending blessings of the Bright and Morning Star to you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2024 3:40:00 PM

Awesome message, Sam. Tommy told me to check out your acrostic here

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/1/2024 10:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea! Always such a treat to read your perceptive, insightful feedback! I am very appreciative of your support and Tom's reference. Hope you are having a great summer! Blessings of the Morning Star to you!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/30/2024 5:30:00 PM

Sam, this is such a reverent, joyous spiritual praise of God! Janice

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/31/2024 1:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice! It became my prayer. I am so happy that came through to you! This was a wonderful theme bringing about many moments of joyful exploration! Sending you all the blessings of the Bright Morning Star!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/30/2024 1:30:00 PM

Ahh!! Very uplifting entry in the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your faith with us. Sara K

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/31/2024 1:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara. I wrote several versions before finalizing this version. It was a wonderful opportunity to experience, and prayerfully explore, each name. ending you all the blessings of the Morning Star for you each day!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/30/2024 6:01:00 AM

Dear Sam, After reading your beautiful poem, I felt like I had my devotion today. Yes, our Lord is our Morning Star! Praise to our Lord and Savior! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/30/2024 11:17:00 AM

Greetings Daniel! What a beautiful response to this poem. I am deeply touched. There can be no great compliment, my friend, than to know these simple words were a source of prayer. So grateful. This theme challenged me to, once again, explore all of the names attributed to our Lord. There was definite joy in that journey and even greater joy to share our poems in fellowship! Thank you, dear friend. Sending you blessings of summer joy!

Tom Woody

Date: 7/29/2024 3:35:00 PM

I was hoping someone would take this angle. I was tempted to do it myself but yours is excellent, so it's all good

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/1/2024 10:39:00 AM

Hi Tom! Thanks for the referral to Andrea. I so appreciate your support and encouragement! Blessings to you!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/29/2024 4:14:00 PM

Hi Tom, thank you so much! Wrote a couple of versions but this one won out! I hope you will write one on this theme. Would be fun to see what you create. Blessings to you!