Daystar

Beautiful imagery of romantic or maybe spiritual; I see hints of both. Congrats on your placement.

Saphire skies and evergreen Eden are great colorful descriptions! Reviving wilted lilies, I mean just wow. Congrats on your win in my contest.

As always you do the acrostic in your own unique style... Great use of opening words, metaphors and adjectives.... We all want to dream beneath sparkling skies adorned with ice blue sapphires... How beautiful and romantic would tha be... love the ending with how you have revived wilted lilies with perfumed prose... best of luck in the contest..

Dear Empress, After reading your insightful Acrostic I felt the longing for an ideal, pure world filled with beauty, hope, and spiritual renewal. Yes, I really think that many of us have a desire for a perfect, Eden-like existence free from deception and negativity. Good luck on the contest, and I believe you have a winner for sure. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Your poetry is stunning both in short and lengthy form, whether it is acrostic or an elegy. You can deal with any topic and every poetic form, for poetry flows through your veins like life blood. We all yearn for an evergreen Eden. Let us hope that in the place of wilted lilies, newer ones will bloom. All the Best dear Empress.

Very nice Ink Empress, beautiful words!

Absolutely gorgeous, Ink. This is a fave. :)

Lovely alliteration... loved the part about erasing deceit <3

I'll always admire your alliteration. A delightful acrostic which deserves the best placement. So cleverly done.

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I will have to listen to the song. Sara K

It's best to dream when the skies look surreal. Whether in real life or in our thoughts. I definitely want back the world where there's peace and honesty. Just eat, live and create memories. "Yearning for an evergreen Eden~saturated with tender celestial light." And true people who see themselves and love others. The world is full of many bad people and I keep wondering. What really went wrong. Why did they choose to be harmful and wicked. But there are lots of questions left unanswered dear Ink

How do you write so well to every prompt . Day star . Wow

Dreaming beneath sparkling skies, mmmm the way y make elements shine papi .,. adorned with ice-blue sapphires… seee!!! as the rose moon unfurls wisteria warmth, oooo sooo dreamy papi!! reviving wilted lilies with perfumed prose… mmm look at the elegance you bring aeee … wilted lilies … perfumed prose!!!! Mmmmm like biting into a piece of cake made in heaven!!! Gorgeous!!