Days Soul Made Whole

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Poetic Form: Grook

Inspired: 2024 August 09

Image: N/A

"Non-intervention by others or by other means than natural causation, accords the many hither before you the pain of death, and the many hereafter the pleasure of eternal life, " ...by The Poet.

formation fleeting forgiving ~
swelt sunset surrendering
drooping dusk dying ...
crying crescent cessation
traumatic twilight terminates ...
named numerated nullified
remains respite respected ~
shallow space shadowing
masking midnight mummified
permanent passage paradise ...

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Constance La France

Date: 10/1/2024 10:38:00 AM

Hilo, congratultions on your win in my Grook contest, like your quote, Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/3/2025 12:25:00 PM

Mahalo, Constance, as this is my second day I've spent in the hospital since paramedics rushed me here on the 30th of September, My apologies for my belated response. Aloha~William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2024 7:33:00 AM

Great to see your work honored on the winners' list in Constance's contest. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2024 9:23:00 AM

My thanks made shorter by heart, Sara. Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/23/2024 2:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/23/2024 2:42:00 PM

TGIF, Paula for this awakening my appreciation. Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/22/2024 12:56:00 PM

Aloha Wiliam. Very persuasive and powerful write. Congratulations! :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/22/2024 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, Linda, for your tight grip. Aloha William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2024 7:44:00 AM

reads alliteratively (of course), like a list, each line pounding out death. Congrats. A fave for me so I can go back one day and weave in and out of the lines! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2024 6:02:00 AM

My out of town grands went home on Friday. Rested up this weekend. I think I’m back. I wrote and read when I could but didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring their poetry. Bless you, dear William!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/22/2024 10:21:00 AM

Unsure if your time away has expired, so enjoy or welcome back, nonetheless I appreciate you Kim, you are blessed. Aloha William