William Kelii Kekaula Poet Grook

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Poetic Form: Grook

Inspired: 2024 August 09

Image: N/A

 

Days Soul Made Whole

"Non-intervention by others or by other means than natural causation, accords the many hither before you the pain of death, and the many hereafter the pleasure of eternal life, " ...by The Poet.

formation fleeting forgiving ~
swelt sunset surrendering
drooping dusk dying ...
crying crescent cessation
traumatic twilight terminates ...
named numerated nullified
remains respite respected ~
shallow space shadowing
masking midnight mummified
permanent passage paradise ...

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Constance La France October 1, 2024 at 10:38 AM Hilo, congratultions on your win in my Grook contest, like your quote, Constance William Kelii Kekaula January 3, 2025 at 12:25 PM Mahalo, Constance, as this is my second day I've spent in the hospital since paramedics rushed me here on the 30th of September, My apologies for my belated response. Aloha~William

Sara Kendrick August 24, 2024 at 7:33 AM Great to see your work honored on the winners' list in Constance's contest. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K William Kelii Kekaula August 24, 2024 at 9:23 AM My thanks made shorter by heart, Sara. Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith August 23, 2024 at 2:10 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away........... William Kelii Kekaula August 23, 2024 at 2:42 PM TGIF, Paula for this awakening my appreciation. Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler August 22, 2024 at 12:56 PM Aloha Wiliam. Very persuasive and powerful write. Congratulations! :) William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2024 at 3:03 PM Thank you, Linda, for your tight grip. Aloha William

Kim Rodrigues August 22, 2024 at 7:44 AM reads alliteratively (of course), like a list, each line pounding out death. Congrats. A fave for me so I can go back one day and weave in and out of the lines! :) Kim Rodrigues August 26, 2024 at 6:02 AM My out of town grands went home on Friday. Rested up this weekend. I think I’m back. I wrote and read when I could but didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring their poetry. Bless you, dear William! William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2024 at 10:21 AM Unsure if your time away has expired, so enjoy or welcome back, nonetheless I appreciate you Kim, you are blessed. Aloha William

thriveni c mysore August 22, 2024 at 5:04 AM grook with tongue twister! difficult write,only you can pull off. congratulations dear poet friend. William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2024 at 9:44 AM Thanks thriveni, always nice hearing from you, Aloha William

Jay Narain August 10, 2024 at 10:09 AM Great Grook poem. William Kelii Kekaula August 10, 2024 at 11:00 AM Thank you my friend.