Days of Youth

Time’s repast, a daily entrée on it‘s menu,
A choice day to use or not and bid adieu.

Presenting the wrinkles wrecking my brow,
life’s accomplice takes a dubious bow.

The ways of the world were easy to understand,
once I pulled my head from of it’s shifting sand.

Strangely, It is myself that I did not know,
Who I was and where I could go.

In my mind I redo the scenes in so many takes,
(Act forty scene two, now let’s up the stakes).

All of this is only fodder for the present session,
Lord, am I ready?  Help me with today’s lesson.



for Brian Strand's contest (any poem or theme, 12 lines) 7/02/11)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 7:24 AM
LOOKING INWARD IS NOT ALWAYS THE BEST PLACE TO GO BUT IT IS WHERE CHANGE BEGINS. SEE HOW YOU MAKE ME THINK? !!
Maverick Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 12:22 PM
I like this one Robert..and i like the way you defer to God, may he bless you abundantly...
Loving Iii Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 4:52 AM
the last line, the line of submision. john
Onclaud Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 5:15 AM
wow, robert.. sweet cheers on your great win.. splendid! :) huggs!
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 5:17 PM
Those lessons that get sent our way sometimes are hard to understand but the sooner we learn the sooner we can move on up the ladder of knowledge and get another lesson that we haven't learned...Good one that read like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara
Horne Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Very clever write, Robert
Neels Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 7:34 AM
See Robert, I knew this one would make the list!! Congratulations to you on your awesome win ;-) love Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 6:15 AM
Excellent, insightful introspective poem, Rob. Congratulations on your top win! Well deserved, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 4:56 AM
Congrats Robert on your first place win luv with this intense and lovely write ..happy 4th with fireworks to celebrate ...
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 11:53 PM
Congrats Robert on your win...enjoyed your poem.
George   Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 11:30 PM
Excellent, Robert. Lainie
Johnson Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 5:28 PM
good one mate, introspective of the slate, on ya, Don
Neels Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Gosh Robert, I sure love this one especially your last couplet :) all the best for Brian's contest.. love Wilma
Foulk Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 9:56 AM
A really great piece of creative work. thank you for commenting on Silence of a Falling Star.
Gorelick Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Love it..some great lines in this...I have a mental picture of you pulling your head out of the sand...BG
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