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Days of Youth-Tritina Contest

As I sit on my peaceful porch, I sit and think, about an old lover that I had in my youth. How he often kissed me passionately. I've never loved another so passionately. It gives me such pleasure to just think, of days long ago when I was a youth I wish I could somehow relive my youth, to be free to love wild and passionately. I'm reunited with my beloved I as I think, I sit and think passionately about my youth. 2-16-19 Tritina: Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 2/25/2019 4:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Alexis.
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Date: 2/24/2019 6:17:00 PM
Nicely penned Alexis...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 2/24/2019 4:54:00 PM
delightfully penned Alexis, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2019 4:27:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Alexis. So many great ones in my contest and yours is no exception. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie :)
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Date: 2/24/2019 2:38:00 PM
yours remains one of my favorites. Congrats on your win. Silly me, I forgot to enter mine!!
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Date: 2/24/2019 2:43:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I appreciate you saying that. Just so you know, I was inspired to write mines after reading yours. It was a good entry. You would have placed if you would have remembered to enter it:-) Alexis
Date: 2/18/2019 2:06:00 AM
May you live your thoughts in reality and may you love more passionately than before dear, Alexis! Powerful and emotional writing! Good luck my friend! xxx
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Date: 2/17/2019 1:52:00 AM
As I understand (I always stick out my neck a little) you are now with your beloved one from your youth or have I mis-interpreted it? A longing prevails in this poem - a beautiful write Alexis. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/18/2019 2:12:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, The poem is about one reminiscing and thinking about an old lover. That they met when they was young. Thanks for asking:-) Alexis
Date: 2/16/2019 9:56:00 PM
oh wow, this is one that I could have written about because I have one of these in my past too. I love your tritina!!
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Date: 2/16/2019 6:01:00 PM
This is a wonderful write for a challenging contest my friend.
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Date: 2/16/2019 4:38:00 PM
such a delightful piece glowing with youthful love... very nice, alxis... huggs
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