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Days of Spring

The starkness of winter is left behind In it's wake comes inbound spring every step with joyful delight She dressed herself with greenery Putting on her finest dress As her beauty is heightened the Flowers poke their heads laughing, dancing with delight Colors of floral explosion appear as her sweet scented perfume fills the air. Birds are returning to her warmth as she dances with the wind The winter blues have begun to lift Spring waltzes in on the incoming breeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/30/2013 6:51:00 AM
Very nice poem Phyllis, a beautiful season beautifully described. Well done, loved it.
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Date: 5/29/2013 10:34:00 AM
hi Pyhllis on a winner here I love spring and you have described it so well Linda
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Date: 5/25/2013 10:50:00 AM
i am having the joy of having spring waltz into my imagery. Lovely poem Phyllis. ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/25/2013 8:52:00 AM
very beautiful. Nice use of Mathaphors in this piece.
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Date: 5/24/2013 3:15:00 PM
just beautiful, Phyll. Hope you're having a great weekend, my friend x
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Date: 5/23/2013 8:58:00 PM
This is a breathtaking beauty my dear friend Phyllis! I love it! Congratulations on your well-deserved amazing poem and grand win! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/23/2013 1:23:00 AM
congrats Phyllis ...Seren
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Date: 5/22/2013 12:29:00 PM
Enchanting, congrats on your win. Best wishes S.
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Date: 5/22/2013 10:21:00 AM
The scent of fresh mown grass heralds the arrival of my favorite time of year... Congrats on a well deserved win... Jake
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Date: 5/22/2013 10:08:00 AM
spring personified. LOVELY, Phyllis! Nice to see you today. it's a warm and sunny day. YAY!
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Date: 5/22/2013 8:58:00 AM
Happy Birthday once again LOVELY PHYLLIS. xox~ CONGRATULATIONS!!! i like the way winter will waddle away and take the blues with it. a truly nice poem to enjoy and explore... Linda
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Date: 5/22/2013 6:43:00 AM
You bring Spring to life nicely, Phyl. Love, daver
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:10:00 AM
Who could not smile upon reading this beauty....filled with joy and rebirth! And speaking of "birth".....!! haha...HAPPY BIRTHDAY tomorrow to you too, Phyllis........it is my honor to share this special day with someone as kind as you! (it takes the sting out of becoming older !! lol !!) Hope your day is wonderful !!
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Date: 5/20/2013 7:45:00 AM
This one is light and airy..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..SoupMail soon..Sara
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Date: 5/20/2013 4:14:00 AM
- Beautiful poem Phyllis ................ finally coming spring to you. - Have a lovely day my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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