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The last raspberry tea awaits me . . .


 

I have the perfect view

          of romance,

as an acrobatic wind

          dances through,

the sapphire blue


 

    Let me linger in,

days of silk and sun-hats


 

     - thoughts of you -


 

And the touch of,

            a love

. . .   forever true

 

_______________

~*~ Daydreaming ~*~

Days of Silk and Sun-Hats

A Simple Scribble
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Baker Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 1:57 PM
A lovely daydream indeed, Brandy. So finely written that nothing is needed to experience it myself. Thanks for the pleasant thoughts to ponder on my friend. A mile of smiles, Bill
Nicole Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 1:04 PM
Any day when the sun plays hide and seek in a tender sky, is a wonderful day to embrace. A perfect day to linger in a daydream. I'm so happy that you were able to caress such a moment through my words. Thank you Bill, for your lovely comment. I can feel your smiles. My best to you. :) Brandy
Gentile Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 5:43 AM
The breeze of romance envelops my soul as I drift in the softness of your words! You are a lovely and sensitive poet!!
Nicole Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Such a beautiful comment and compliment. I'm blushing. Words should touch the skin, all the senses. Thank you, Mike. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Wolves Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 4:01 PM
wow.... I am so melting....sigh
Nicole Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Awe, such a sweet thing to say. Thank you, Robert. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Schneiter Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Sweet and soft and tender as a spring breeze, and as romantic as love-lit eyes under a full moon. * * * I hope you are wonderfully well, Brandy. Hugs, Paul
Nicole Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 8:02 PM
Such a breeze is elegant and graceful, caressing the skin ever so sweetly. Your thoughts are tender and beautiful. (I am) doing *wonderfully well*. My best to you, Paul. :) Hugs, Brandy
Strand Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 1:01 AM
With Fall upon us Brandy my panama will soon go into winte stotage(sadly)Have a creative weekend
Nicole Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Same here, Brian. All of my summer attire is about to be packed away until next year. Fall is such a beautiful and inspiring time. I am enjoying a wonderful weekend. I hope all is well in your world. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Fenn Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Very cool “simple scribble”!
Nicole Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 8:34 PM
So sweet of you to say. Thank you, Jennifer. My best to you. :) Brandy
Chunn Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 12:01 PM
I really like that pictures painted in this poem. The openness and airy freedom is palpable. Nicely done. Looking forward to more.
Nicole Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Thank you, Andy. Moments create many beautiful memories. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 5:45 AM
Wistfully sexy. I like the image this paints on my mind. Thanks as well for your thoughtful visit to my latest piece.hugs Rick.
Nicole Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 7:11 PM
*Sexy in the sheets* Perhaps.. Thank you, Rick. I am blushing with your thoughts. You are very welcome. Your pen is golden. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rone Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Thats such a profound image accompanying your poem. I speak for all saying I wish I was there. - Ken
Nicole Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 6:49 PM
So kind of you to say, Ken. Wishing to be in such a moment. Your comment is tender and beautiful. :) Brandy
Proxenos Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Mystic Rose Rose has nailed almost exactly what I was about to say, you are gifted dear Brandy. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Nicole Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. Great minds think alike. (Soft smile) I appreciate your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rose  Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 5:56 PM
very beautiful and ethereally done :)
Nicole Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 7:14 PM
Thank you, Mystic Rose. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Sands Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 7:52 AM
This is so sweet and a pleasure to read today. Beautiful Brandy :)
Nicole Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 9:20 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Your thoughts bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Alex Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 7:30 PM
Beautiful Memories.
Nicole Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy
Watt Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 10:11 AM
"an acrobatic wind dances through, the sapphire blue", has me reminiscing of happy days of summers past and looking forward to summer that is just around the corner. My first romance was in summer, long ago now, but the memories are sweet and nostalgic. Thank you for taking me there, Brandy. All my best to you ~ John
Nicole Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 7:11 PM
As the wind races and then plays somersaults, love is welcomed by a tender heart. "Summer love" Seems we have all experienced a touch of melancholy, mixed with beautiful and breathtaking moments. Thank you, John. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 7:06 PM
You paint a beautiful picture with this wonderful poem Brandy.. best wishes
Nicole Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 5:59 PM
Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy
Mcconnell Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Lovely penned piece Brandy, full of beauty and romance and a joy to read indeed. Hope all's well, blessings, Gordon
Nicole Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 5:21 PM
Thank you, Gordon. Daydreaming of romance and such tender moments. I appreciate you and your wonderful comment. I am doing well. My best to you. :) Brandy
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 6:07 PM
Brandy, you've written a wonderful poem. I see the first sentence, "The final raspberry tea awaiting me," as an invitation to share a special moment:) It's a pleasure to read you this early evening. Amazing Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 8:24 PM
Hi Lasaad, your kind words bring a smile. Sharing a romantic moment with someone special. A beautiful daydream indeed. I am so happy that you enjoyed this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy
Callus Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 3:57 PM
A delightful poem that I'd classify as vintage, going by the title and content, Brandy. I find the introductory line "The last raspberry tea awaits me" to be an invitation to share a moment of romance with you. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul
Nicole Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:45 PM
Yes, this could be labeled as vintage, with the title and the photo. The mood that has been set. Oh my ! Sharing in a romantic moment with me- that is a possibility. Thank you, Paul. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Buhagiar Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 3:05 AM
I missed this beautiful romantic poem. o much imagery that makes the mind work overtime. Hugs.
Nicole Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Victor, your thoughts caress softly around me. Romance is in the air and I am lingering in a daydream. Thank you, my sweet friend, for your kind words. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lindley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 8:46 PM
O' so much more than a simple scribble my dear friend! Tis a truly delightful romantic and enticing new creation. I do so love raspberry tea myself. Always sweetened with honey , instead of sugar. Wonderful imagery and such a smooth flow. A delight, a fav... God bless...
Nicole Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 5:41 PM
Thank you, Robert. Your thoughts caress softly around my heart. I am so happy that you enjoyed what I have created here. Moments of sunshine and love, a sip of tea. Honey is delightful in the mix. Thank you for all your kind words. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Ball Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Oh I do Like this one. So well expressed. There is a summery feel to this. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
Nicole Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 7:13 PM
Thank you, Judy. Summer is such a beautiful season. :) So kind of you to place this in your favorites. I am smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Wolf Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Titled perfectly, Brandy! Excelsior, gw
Nicole Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 8:58 PM
Thank you, Gershon. I enjoy daydreaming : ) Brandy
Horsman Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 11:28 PM
For one of such simple scribbles, in my opinion enough to move mountains, yes your poetry is so beautiful, it moves this old bugger to tears...You and your muse are very precious my dear.
Nicole Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 7:48 PM
"My simple thoughts are "Enough to move Mountains" I am in awe with this compliment, along with being *precious* Thank you, Harry. Your thoughts touch my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Downing  Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Ahhh, all of a sudden my Lipton tea just tasted so much better as I’m reading this delightful and delicious raspberry tea on this romantic summer view... Sooooo good to read you this early evening beautiful Brandy :)
Nicole Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:44 PM
Softly smiling at you, Akkina. I am happy that you found my words *Delightful and Delicious* all at the same time. Your thoughts bring a smile, on a tender Monday evening. Thank you ! My best to you. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 4:40 AM
How beautifully romantic write, Brandy! Perfect view of romance---days of silk---splendid vocabulary. Daydreams of the heart!
Nicole Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 7:56 PM
An amazing compliment, coming from such a talented writer as yourself. Thank you, Vijay. I don't have a *Splendid vocabulary* I am just scribbling words from the heart. Daydreams and moments. :) Brandy
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