Days of Our Lives

First day of our life
The mother is ecstatic
Finally her pains and burdens are over
Ululations and congratulations are on
Could even be the next president
But father is in tears
Camouflaged as honest joy
Another big mouth to feed

Second day of our life
The priest is ecstatic
Finally another person in line for tithe
Could even be the next pope
But mother is in tears
Camouflaged as the touching by the word
Village thugs and whores praying for you
Another statistic of robbery without violence

Third day of our life
The teacher is ecstatic
Finally someone to be the Aristotle to their Plato
Could even be the next Einstein
But priest is in tears
Camouflaged as tears for absolution
Lawyers and politicians consecrating you
Another greedy scholar on the rise

Fourth day of our life
The couters are ecstatic
Finally we love being in love
Could even get married bells ringing
But teacher is in tears
Camouflaged as being proud of you
Another dumb romantic who never learns



Fifth day of our life
We are very ecstatic
Finally we made a new life
Could it be the need to sustain bliss human mediocrity?
But our sweethearts are in tears
Camouflaged as being happy for you
Another one escapes dying alone

Sixth day of our life
Grandchildren are ecstatic
Finally someone else full of laughter and ambition
Could it be their I-phone is the only new thing under the sun?
But we are in tears
Camouflaged as pain in our backs
Another generation who don’t know how short life is

The last day of my life
The better angels inside my head are mourning
Finally I am someone who lived in this world
Could it be because I will be forgotten?
But grandchild is happy
Camouflaged as tears for losing you
Just another man without legacy gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Magnet Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Humourous, well constructed poem, amongst my fav, loved reading it.
A   Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 5:35 PM
an extra sweet win
A  Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 1:24 AM
Moses, Congrats on your BURNING DAYLIGHT win. SKAT
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 7:31 PM
AHA--I see that this is a repeat submission. So the third(and obviously the second) time never fail.
A   Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Hi Moses, sweet win...Linda
A  Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 5:30 PM
MOSES, congrats on your Screwed III win. SKAT
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 9:33 AM
A life time's journey in just 7 days - brilliantly penned - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Sichach Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Thank you
Guzzi Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 10:29 AM
I must say that was fantastic, but dark very dark. I'd like it if you wrote one the same way with each person being given a new reason for gratitude? Congrad's on Your win! Light & Love
Sichach Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 1:57 AM
Thank you i will take the advice though i intended it to be cynical
A  Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 9:33 PM
MOSES, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
Sichach Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 1:58 AM
Thank you
Ebbs Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 4:20 PM
I like you assigned benchmark life events as a day...I like that, congrats :)
Sichach Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 1:59 AM
Thank you
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