Days of Glory

Days of glory

These days when women get tortured, torched and raped
In democracies deemed the most enlightened
Remember glorious days women once shaped,
Being  empowered and liberated no end

In my matrilineal*  clan;  where they flourished
In  joint homes, respected, loved and well nourished
Didn’t need to leave home , owned family estates
Kicked and took husbands to suit their tastes and states.

9th Jan 13.

Form : Rispetto: Rhy Sch:a-b-a-b-c-c-d-d/ 11 sylls per line

PS:* We  not long ago had a matrilineal line of inheritance where women played key, powerful familial roles in large joint families headed by a maternal uncle-like figure where men were supposed to work and provide for them, protect and respect them. Women never left homes after marriage,  and were free to reject and receive their husbands as they pleased.

By: S.Jagathsimhan Nair

For Debbie's " 8 lines any kind" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carrillo Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 10:45 AM
I saw you won with this one. Congratulations. It is nice to know how women are treated in other Countries. i guess those were the Good old days. Great poem, thanks for sharing....Lucilla
A  Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 5:58 PM
oh, love the form~SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 10:39 PM
I read this one and then noticed it had just won in the contest. Big congrats, I love how you tell what it used to be like for your women of your country.
A   Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Jag, , :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... PD
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:29 PM
Yes God was a woman for eons before men made her a man ;) Congrad's Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:30 PM
man I still don't like that didn't even leave home part..I've been a bird in a gilded cage..it's not what its cracked up to be
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:56 AM
Jag, big congrats on your HM...David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:28 AM
Congrats on your HM Jag xx
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Thank you for my lesson, always something new to learn. Seren
Andresen Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 2:41 AM
Always nice to read your poems, Jag - Well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Komala Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 9:52 PM
very well written dear Jag...thank you for sharing your brilliant thought :) <3
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 6:04 PM
Nice write! -----Lori
Guzzi Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Thank you for the entry! Light & Love
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