Days of Atonement

G’mar chatima tova.
Forgive me if I stumble 
across the unfamiliar words.

We are not so different.
Each strives to do more good 
than bad; at least to do no harm.

We pause for prayer and reflection,
aspire to be more caring, more giving;
make amends and atone for misdeeds.

So I pray for you my friend.
As the shofar sounds the end, may your
name be sealed in the Book of Life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Buehler Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Beautiful sentiments are expressed in these heartwarming lines. My very best wishes, Evelyn :)
Fowler Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 5:20 AM
Thank you for the kind words Evelyn. hugs, Linda
Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 7:22 PM
A wonderful, moving poem, Linda. Let us hope that our prayers have been heard and accepted Above, and now onward to our Season of Rejoicing, Sukkoth! Blessings
Fowler Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 7:40 PM
A season of rejoicing-Sukkoth! Many thanks for the stop-by and comments. Yes, blessings to you as well my friend, Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Beautiful! I hear it!
Fowler Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Many thanks Kim. :)
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