Day's End

The sea, boundless glass glistening
Sun’s lustrous rays, the day’s last painting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 9:03 PM
A fine example of a quality crystalline. It looks as if you reside close to a shoreline.
Iliadou Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 3:36 PM
the day’s last painting... Very nice work. Valeria Iliadou
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 2:43 PM
very pretty cystalline and seems to show how this type of poem got the name Crystalline!
Mehta Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Beautiful picture of the colorful evening you have created, linda
Gorelick Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 8:31 AM
Beautiful work...BG
Falotico Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 5:58 AM
Beautiful Poetry for a Sunday morning...
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