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Days End

Setting of the sun when the day has come and gone daylight fades to night

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2011 9:22:00 PM

Aha, and here it would be, at DAYS END!! And I am almost at my comments' end. It was lovely seeing you today, Phyllis.

Date: 3/22/2010 4:19:00 PM

Glad I ran across this poem today. Such a peaceful piece. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/15/2010 1:03:00 PM

Feet up , Phyll and relax zzzzzzzzzz ....

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/15/2010 10:23:00 AM

i love watching the sunset i do it everyday on the ride home from work, this is a great haiku. i loved it =)

Date: 2/7/2010 1:20:00 PM

You have me smiling with this scene. Nice way to end the day. Feels so peaceful. Karen

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/26/2010 4:56:00 AM

Dear Phyllis, Great Haiku I often sit on my porch and watch the sunset and "Daylight fades to night" Sorry I haven't kept in touch Hope all is well with YOU and YOURS ALWAYS.. .HG

Marty Owens

Date: 1/24/2010 1:14:00 PM

Love your beautiful Haiku...Marty

Constance La France

Date: 1/18/2010 12:57:00 PM

Very descriptive and beautiful..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/18/2010 10:16:00 AM

Describes the days "light" perfectly. Lovely. BG

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/18/2010 8:34:00 AM

Beautiful...... I am a nocturnal being, so when daylight fades I am in my comfort zone...... You should check out my collaboration with Richard Pickett, my father.... "The Sun Rises--The Moon Sets"......:JP]

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/18/2010 8:24:00 AM

Really - very good, thanks for sharing that one

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2010 7:59:00 AM

The stillness of the eve is aptly described here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara