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Days End

Setting of the sun

when the day has come and gone

daylight fades to night

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Andrea Dietrich

June 9, 2011 at 9:22 PM

Aha, and here it would be, at DAYS END!! And I am almost at my comments' end. It was lovely seeing you today, Phyllis.

March 22, 2010 at 4:19 PM

Glad I ran across this poem today. Such a peaceful piece. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Sean Kelly

February 15, 2010 at 1:03 PM

Feet up , Phyll and relax zzzzzzzzzz ....

Joanna Smith

February 15, 2010 at 10:23 AM

i love watching the sunset i do it everyday on the ride home from work, this is a great haiku. i loved it =)

February 7, 2010 at 1:20 PM

You have me smiling with this scene. Nice way to end the day. Feels so peaceful. Karen

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

January 26, 2010 at 4:56 AM

Dear Phyllis, Great Haiku I often sit on my porch and watch the sunset and "Daylight fades to night" Sorry I haven't kept in touch Hope all is well with YOU and YOURS ALWAYS.. .HG

Marty Owens

January 24, 2010 at 1:14 PM

Love your beautiful Haiku...Marty

Constance La France

January 18, 2010 at 12:57 PM

Very descriptive and beautiful..

Barbara Gorelick

January 18, 2010 at 10:16 AM

Describes the days "light" perfectly. Lovely. BG

Jared Pickett

January 18, 2010 at 8:34 AM

Beautiful...... I am a nocturnal being, so when daylight fades I am in my comfort zone...... You should check out my collaboration with Richard Pickett, my father.... "The Sun Rises--The Moon Sets"......:JP]