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Day's End

It’s a cold autumn day Late afternoon is passing Garden cleaned – stretch to toes Hot espresso cup laden I sit in contented peace With grateful sated sigh
I was working on this as a 6 line poem but wanted a bit of a haiku feeling... I came up with this 6,7,6,7,7,6 as a Siku.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/2/2019 8:00:00 AM
Nice one Jeanne. Know that feeling well. Best wishes. Ron x
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Date: 9/1/2019 10:09:00 PM
I am wishing I was in your garden right now, wiggling my toes, right along side you, Jeanne.
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