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Days

days

for the snow will fall once more

your face will warm with my hands that touch your such soft skin

for your smile makes me cry Louise i feel at ease

for the sun will shine the cold breeze will move around us pulling
us closer to keep warm

my dream still hurt so much

for i can not feel you soft touch Louise see my good old dreams

for fighting for you is so hard to the heart of lost thoughts

our day will come and i will not be alone


the night walker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 7:50:00 AM
thank you for reading my 'warrior' poem. I like this one. I like the words "touch your such soft skin". The words rather sing here.
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:32:00 PM
Lovely presentation duncan and u make the snow come alive .. enjoyed your creativity tonight luv.. happy weekend...
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Date: 11/19/2010 10:04:00 AM
hmm, for a great friend, thanks for all you great comments Duncan, I can't thank you enough. i will try to read up your works too and comment accordingly as possible as I can. thanks friend,. you can soupmail me if possible. God bless. Adeleke
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Date: 11/18/2010 10:16:00 PM
Continue to pray..If she's for you..she will return excellent write...
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