Daylight Savings Time

. The geese are in form Northward bound, SPRING springs forward___ Loss of sleep for man

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/16/2010 3:22:00 AM

Well written, Sara! We all have some problems to adopt to daylight savings time!! Enjoyed reading your Haiku tthis early afternoon. Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my poems...Have a nice day...Gert

John Freeman

Date: 5/16/2010 12:34:00 PM

Good luck with this worthy presentation Sara. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/15/2010 7:31:00 PM

good job!! enjoyed

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/14/2010 7:49:00 PM

All will adjust in a couple of days... nice use of "Spring springs'. good luck Sara....Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 6:58:00 PM

Another creative write ... good luck if u enter this one.. I like them all.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Rick Parise

Date: 5/14/2010 6:23:00 PM

Nice twist Sara~~Thats what makes you so original~nice job~~~My entry is spring(a marsh land swollen with life rains as the last thread of completion hangs for a needed time and a spirit wind dances and roams for life~ya spring thats it!!!!!!!break it down~~Blessing to you~~Rick

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/14/2010 6:12:00 PM

A good use of the time change...to explain the time of year!! Good luck, Sara!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/14/2010 5:58:00 PM

Seems to be an original one