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Daydreams

I lie amidst a pride of dandelions. Odoriferous breaths overwhelm me. Above, a sea with white wispy phantoms Silently, adrift, like lost ships at sea. I close my eyes but still see everything. For what's perceived is also imagined. A subtle April breeze whispers... it’s spring. I smile with eyes still closed then I begin Soliloquy: I need no gallery Nor brush and palette to paint that which I see. All I have seen is stored in memory And abstract thought can launch this reverie. I lie still among these yellow flowers Lost in springtime daydreams by the hours.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/29/2009 12:19:00 AM
Beautiful! Beautiful!! Well done, Albert.
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Date: 11/26/2009 2:07:00 AM
Beautifully write daydream on this featured poem. Keep your creative and magical poem flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/25/2009 10:38:00 AM
Albert - many congrats on your beautifully descriptive piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/23/2009 7:54:00 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/23/2009 2:19:00 PM
Great imagery in this piece, I was swept away by the beauty and peace of it. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 11/23/2009 12:05:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week >> James
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Albert. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 3:14:00 AM
Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 11/22/2009 5:23:00 PM
Creative use of imagery for an interesting view. Spring is my favorite season so I can relate to your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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