Daydreaming of You

Sitting with daydream bubbles overhead
My mind drifting in imagination
Remembering all, the things you have said
Drawing pictures from heartfelt sensations
That cotton candy smile of friendliness
Happy eyes like a teddy bear surprise
Shiny hair with a flowery fragrance
Feathery skin soft as baby blue skies
Prancing around in old worn out blue jeans
Pretending you're dancing with another
Laughing and swirling in your own daydream
With a fantasized secretive lover
Now I've drifted back to reality
Wondering if you were dancing with me



   English Sonnet  abab cdcd efef gg
   an original poem by Daniel "poemdog" Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 3/6/2016 8:02:00 AM
fantasized secretive lover....a perfect sonnet indeed...! It runs through my ears now....:)))))...thank you for this marvellous piece Hugs RED. ..
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/6/2016 9:08:00 AM
I guess they are...hopefully. ..glad that I made you smile....cheers !
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/6/2016 9:00:00 AM
I appreciate your kindness and I'm kind of partial to this one myself, as we all daydream about someone. The question is, are they dreaming about you? Today I will laugh and dance with you. You have made me smile. Peace to you young lady:)
Date: 2/29/2016 3:38:00 PM
I love your sonnets - so romantic and overflowing with delightful imagery! This beauty deserves a-7 for sure! Best regards. Pandita
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/29/2016 4:16:00 PM
Thank you my dear. I have been trying earnestly to learn to write them. I appreciate your kindness and your time. Peace to you dear Pandita:)
Date: 2/28/2016 3:15:00 PM
Excellent sonnet my friend, smooth with fine message of romance and daydreaming. A7
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/28/2016 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. Your kindness is overflowing Peace and God Bless:)
Date: 2/24/2016 8:02:00 PM
Very vivid imagery, very creative, a whimsical daydream sonnet. Excellent writing.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/24/2016 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, Ms Cynthia. I am flattered and appreciative of such high praise. I really appreciate you spending your time to read and comment. Peace to you my friend:)
Date: 2/24/2016 3:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your daydream sonnet..May all your good day dreams come true..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/24/2016 3:35:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I always appreciate you taking your time to read and comment. I really appreciate your good wishes for my happiness. Peace dear lady:)
Date: 2/24/2016 1:42:00 PM
light, airy, very imaginative--enjoyable! Janice
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/24/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. I'm still trying to learn how to write good sonnets. I appreciate your support. I also appreciate you spending your valuable time reading and commenting. Peace my dear:)
Date: 2/23/2016 6:51:00 PM
Of course she was Daniel. You bring a smile to all our faces here too.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 6:55:00 PM
Jean, you are just too sweet. It is one my goals in life to make as many people as I can to smile. You already had a beautiful smile when I met you. Thank you for showing it to me again. Your friend. ME. Peace and have a blessed day:)
Date: 2/23/2016 5:18:00 PM
May all your daydreams come true! Great write.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thank you dear Jeannie, I Appreciate your amity.The pleasure is always mine. Peace my friend:)
Date: 2/23/2016 3:39:00 PM
We all love to daydream from time to time.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 3:41:00 PM
We sure do. What would life be without it? I'm glad you stopped by, Tim. Thanks for the comment and taking time to read. Peace my friend:)
Date: 2/23/2016 3:10:00 PM
Stop wondering and assume she was dancing with you. Guaranteed to make you smile. ;) Well done.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 3:11:00 PM
That made me laugh out loud. Thank you, Peaches. I needed that!
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