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Daydreaming of You

Sitting with daydream bubbles overhead My mind drifting in imagination Remembering all, the things you have said Drawing pictures from heartfelt sensations That cotton candy smile of friendliness Happy eyes like a teddy bear surprise Shiny hair with a flowery fragrance Feathery skin soft as baby blue skies Prancing around in old worn out blue jeans Pretending you're dancing with another Laughing and swirling in your own daydream With a fantasized secretive lover Now I've drifted back to reality Wondering if you were dancing with me English Sonnet abab cdcd efef gg an original poem by Daniel "poemdog" Turner

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Red Fiery

Date: 3/6/2016 8:02:00 AM

fantasized secretive lover....a perfect sonnet indeed...! It runs through my ears now....:)))))...thank you for this marvellous piece Hugs RED. ..

Red Fiery
Date: 3/6/2016 9:08:00 AM

I guess they are...hopefully. ..glad that I made you smile....cheers !

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/6/2016 9:00:00 AM

I appreciate your kindness and I'm kind of partial to this one myself, as we all daydream about someone. The question is, are they dreaming about you? Today I will laugh and dance with you. You have made me smile. Peace to you young lady:)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/29/2016 3:38:00 PM

I love your sonnets - so romantic and overflowing with delightful imagery! This beauty deserves a-7 for sure! Best regards. Pandita

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/29/2016 4:16:00 PM

Thank you my dear. I have been trying earnestly to learn to write them. I appreciate your kindness and your time. Peace to you dear Pandita:)

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/28/2016 3:15:00 PM

Excellent sonnet my friend, smooth with fine message of romance and daydreaming. A7

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/28/2016 3:17:00 PM

Thank you, Robert. Your kindness is overflowing Peace and God Bless:)

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 2/24/2016 8:02:00 PM

Very vivid imagery, very creative, a whimsical daydream sonnet. Excellent writing.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/24/2016 8:08:00 PM

Thank you, Ms Cynthia. I am flattered and appreciative of such high praise. I really appreciate you spending your time to read and comment. Peace to you my friend:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2016 3:33:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your daydream sonnet..May all your good day dreams come true..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/24/2016 3:35:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. I always appreciate you taking your time to read and comment. I really appreciate your good wishes for my happiness. Peace dear lady:)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/24/2016 1:42:00 PM

light, airy, very imaginative--enjoyable! Janice

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/24/2016 1:45:00 PM

Thank you, Janice. I'm still trying to learn how to write good sonnets. I appreciate your support. I also appreciate you spending your valuable time reading and commenting. Peace my dear:)

Jean Murray

Date: 2/23/2016 6:51:00 PM

Of course she was Daniel. You bring a smile to all our faces here too.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 6:55:00 PM

Jean, you are just too sweet. It is one my goals in life to make as many people as I can to smile. You already had a beautiful smile when I met you. Thank you for showing it to me again. Your friend. ME. Peace and have a blessed day:)