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Daydreaming

Somedays I feel like crazy, The world seems unhealthy. My day seems boring, And I don't know what to think. I look out of my window, To find trees and people I didn't know. Daydreaming seemed to be my best hobby, Dreaming of what if I was a barbie. But then reality seem to slowly confront, As I open my eyes, to find my homework still undone. I grab my pen and rush over, When will my studies be done, ohh dear! 15/6/2022

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Date: 7/1/2022 11:40:00 AM
" reality seem to slowly confront" - Realization... Beautiful writing .
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 7/2/2022 2:42:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comment...Glad you liked it! :)
Date: 6/24/2022 7:57:00 AM
Komal, you are passing through the most pleasing face of your life. As a retired person, when I look back, I see my school days and college days as the most exciting phase of my life though I was eager then to see my studies completed. So enjoy what's at hand. When inspired, you can turn to poetry too. Unfortunately I started writing poems only after my retirement. Beautifull expressed, Komal
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 6/24/2022 9:33:00 AM
Ohh...yes I have heard that a lot from my parents to study as well as have fun cause this days wont be coming back. But it is difficult to keep a balance. As my schools have started, i have not been getting enough time to write a poetry. Thank you so much for commenting. Greatly appreciated!
Date: 6/17/2022 8:40:00 AM
Poetry comes to one who is daydreaming. The words escape if you don’t write them down quickly. I enjoyed your poem Komal. Keep writing. Blessings xxoo
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 6/17/2022 9:16:00 AM
Yes they do escape Connie, I tend to forget things...Glad you liked it, Thank you so much for commenting on my poem!:) Have a great day:)