Komal Walimbe Poet Rhyme

Daydreaming

Somedays I feel like crazy,
The world seems unhealthy.
My day seems boring,
And I don't know what to think.
I look out of my window,
To find trees and people I didn't know.

Daydreaming seemed to be my best hobby,
Dreaming of what if I was a barbie.
But then reality seem to slowly confront,
As I open my eyes, to find my homework still undone.
I grab my pen and rush over,
When will my studies be done, ohh dear!

15/6/2022

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Christuraj Alex July 1, 2022 at 11:40 AM " reality seem to slowly confront" - Realization... Beautiful writing . Komal Walimbe July 2, 2022 at 2:42 AM Thank you so much for your comment...Glad you liked it! :)

Valsa George June 24, 2022 at 7:57 AM Komal, you are passing through the most pleasing face of your life. As a retired person, when I look back, I see my school days and college days as the most exciting phase of my life though I was eager then to see my studies completed. So enjoy what's at hand. When inspired, you can turn to poetry too. Unfortunately I started writing poems only after my retirement. Beautifull expressed, Komal Komal Walimbe June 24, 2022 at 9:33 AM Ohh...yes I have heard that a lot from my parents to study as well as have fun cause this days wont be coming back. But it is difficult to keep a balance. As my schools have started, i have not been getting enough time to write a poetry. Thank you so much for commenting. Greatly appreciated!

Connie Marcum Wong June 17, 2022 at 8:40 AM Poetry comes to one who is daydreaming. The words escape if you don’t write them down quickly. I enjoyed your poem Komal. Keep writing. Blessings xxoo Komal Walimbe June 17, 2022 at 9:16 AM Yes they do escape Connie, I tend to forget things...Glad you liked it, Thank you so much for commenting on my poem!:) Have a great day:)