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Daydreaming

~ The sun is bright in these skies so blue as my mind wanders daydreaming… Holding your hand, the softness of your skin touching mine, strolling through the park taking in the splendor which lines this winding pathway through the trees When I notice out of the corner of my eye you looking at me I can’t help but smile as I ask, “What are you looking at?” You answer in that melodic voice that so enchants me every time you speak, “The man I love…kiss me” I love daydreaming about you ~

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Heidi Sands

Date: 11/15/2019 7:31:00 PM

I didn't realize the Lucy in sky with Diamonds had been stuck in your head too lol. I just learned that. I guess it is easy with that song :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 8:11:00 AM

It certainly is. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/15/2019 4:57:00 PM

Ok, I just re-read this. It is a beautifully written daydream...and now I can move on to day/night dreaming. Thank you for sharing Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 5:02:00 PM

Thanks Heidi. I appreciate you coming back again (after the song disappeared from your head) I am so happy you liked this one.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/15/2019 4:55:00 PM

Ok, I tried reading this, but had "Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds" stuck in my head from the previous poem. I will start over lol

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 5:02:00 PM

It's still stuck in my head. : )

Hello There

Date: 11/15/2019 4:34:00 PM

Another beautiful stroll...Hearts and hands...smiles and kisses ~ all the makings of true romance.

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 4:43:00 PM

Hi there Hello There. Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this little daydreaming stroll of mine. Sometimes my mind just has a mind of it's own. : )

John Hamilton

Date: 11/15/2019 4:20:00 PM

Dream away, dream away Chris...just don't forget to write it down so we all can enjoy. I love your free verse, it's a nice change!

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 4:23:00 PM

Thanks John. I will do my best my friend. I appreciate all of the support you show me. Thank you again.

W.A. Cholt

Date: 11/15/2019 4:09:00 PM

Great poem, with a depth of feeling that really connects and transports the reader to heart of what's being said.

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 4:12:00 PM

Thanks so much. I am glad you liked it.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/15/2019 3:37:00 PM

Well then my friend you are blessed because that’s the type of love most people only dream of and this poem is exactly how love should be. I love this one Chris ... that beautiful heart shines through again :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 3:43:00 PM

We can all daydream Sandy. : ) Thank you my friend. Your kind words are something I daydream about often.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/15/2019 3:23:00 PM

Charming, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 3:28:00 PM

Thank you my friend.