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Daydreaming

~

The sun is bright
in these skies so blue
as my mind wanders 
daydreaming… 

Holding your hand,
the softness of your skin
touching mine,
strolling through the park
taking in the splendor which 
lines this winding pathway
through the trees

When I notice
out of the corner of my eye
you looking at me
I can’t help but smile as I ask,
“What are you looking at?”
You answer in that melodic voice
that so enchants me every time you speak, 
“The man I love…kiss me”

I love daydreaming about you

~

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Heidi Sands Date: 11/15/2019 7:31:00 PM I didn't realize the Lucy in sky with Diamonds had been stuck in your head too lol. I just learned that. I guess it is easy with that song :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/18/2019 8:11:00 AM It certainly is. :)

Heidi Sands Date: 11/15/2019 4:57:00 PM Ok, I just re-read this. It is a beautifully written daydream...and now I can move on to day/night dreaming. Thank you for sharing Chris :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/15/2019 5:02:00 PM Thanks Heidi. I appreciate you coming back again (after the song disappeared from your head) I am so happy you liked this one.

Heidi Sands Date: 11/15/2019 4:55:00 PM Ok, I tried reading this, but had "Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds" stuck in my head from the previous poem. I will start over lol Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/15/2019 5:02:00 PM It's still stuck in my head. : )

Hello There Date: 11/15/2019 4:34:00 PM Another beautiful stroll...Hearts and hands...smiles and kisses ~ all the makings of true romance. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/15/2019 4:43:00 PM Hi there Hello There. Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this little daydreaming stroll of mine. Sometimes my mind just has a mind of it's own. : )

John Hamilton Date: 11/15/2019 4:20:00 PM Dream away, dream away Chris...just don't forget to write it down so we all can enjoy. I love your free verse, it's a nice change! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/15/2019 4:23:00 PM Thanks John. I will do my best my friend. I appreciate all of the support you show me. Thank you again.

W.A. Cholt Date: 11/15/2019 4:09:00 PM Great poem, with a depth of feeling that really connects and transports the reader to heart of what's being said. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/15/2019 4:12:00 PM Thanks so much. I am glad you liked it.

Sandra Adams Date: 11/15/2019 3:37:00 PM Well then my friend you are blessed because that’s the type of love most people only dream of and this poem is exactly how love should be. I love this one Chris ... that beautiful heart shines through again :) hugs Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/15/2019 3:43:00 PM We can all daydream Sandy. : ) Thank you my friend. Your kind words are something I daydream about often.

Line Gauthier Date: 11/15/2019 3:23:00 PM Charming, Chris. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/15/2019 3:28:00 PM Thank you my friend.