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Hello, I say to my one and only sweetest devotion Daydreamer, I know it was like a million years ago When rolling in the deep, river Lea stirred emotion I miss you my hometown glory, but you don't know Daydreamer, I know it was like a million years ago I want to make you feel my love, I'm crazy for you I miss you my hometown glory, but you don't know Don't melt my heart to stone, our love is still true I want to make you feel my love, I'm crazy for you Why don't you remember, we set fire to the rain Don't melt my heart to stone, our love is still true All I ask is lay me down gently if it all ends in vain Why don't you remember, we set fire to the rain Rumor has it, someone like you dating my friend All I ask is lay me down gently if it all ends in vain Water under the bridge if we've hit the deadend Rumor has it, someone like you dating my friend Turning tables, allow me to confess, I found a boy Water under the bridge if we've hit the deadend Sweet like you when we were young, he's my joy Turning tables, allow me to confess, I found a boy Take it all, cooed my love in the dark, near skyfall Sweet like you when we were young, he's my joy He won't go there yet, but I'll be waiting for his call Take it all, cooed my love in the dark, near skyfall When rolling in the deep, river Lea stirred emotion He won't go there yet, but I'll be waiting for his call Hello, I say to my one and only sweetest devotion April 5, 2018 First Place in Musical Pantoum contest by Silent One Poem of the day on April 7, 2018 This poem includes the following 27 Adele titles: All I ask Crazy for you Daydreamer Don't you remember He won't go Hello Hometown glory I found a boy I miss you I'll be waiting Lay me down Love in the dark Make you feel my love Melt my heart to stone Million years ago One and only River lea Rolling in the deep Rumor has it Set fire to the rain Skyfall Someone like you Sweetest devotion Take it all Turning tables Water under the bridge When we were young

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Date: 11/16/2018 9:53:00 AM
Hi Vijay, you have used the Pantoum form so well. I love the content of this one my friend. You have created an excellent piece, incorporating your song titles. I always enjoy reading the Pantoum form. An excellent write Vijay. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 5/30/2018 2:28:00 PM
Vijay, love your poem and how you wove so many song titles into this Pantoum! Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 5/27/2018 4:24:00 PM
Back again with big congratulations on your Pantoum win for the contest... Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/26/2018 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Date: 5/25/2018 5:12:00 AM
back again with my congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, this is exceptionally clever and beautifully written, well done my friend. :))
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Date: 5/24/2018 9:22:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay, for your excellent win with your exceptional pantoum. Well crafted with awesome and creative use of the song titles. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/24/2018 2:20:00 PM
Great job fitting all those song titles into your pantoum so nicely. Congrats!
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Date: 5/24/2018 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win in the music pentoum contest. Welldone.
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:53:00 PM
Congrats on your top placement, Vijay Well Done !!
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:37:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the competition, a great music choice Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2018 12:53:00 PM
Hi Vijay, It's no surprise that you got such a high placement. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2018 11:56:00 AM
I think Adele is a great singer and you did her great justice with this great pantoum using all those titles.. amazing.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 5/5/2018 9:53:00 AM
My friend, you are indeed a master of romantic poems and with this mix of Adele's song titles, you have again demonstrated your awesome talent! I expect to see this on the winners' list. Bravo! Hugs and love. Pandita
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Date: 4/15/2018 7:53:00 PM
I really enjoyed this you are a very deep poet my friend. Such well expressed thoughts are always enjoyable for me!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/16/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Kyle--always happy to read your feedback.
Date: 4/9/2018 11:52:00 PM
Great job doing all the titles in you well deserved POTD, Vijay! Congrats :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2018 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 4/8/2018 7:47:00 AM
You chose a queen...her song titles speak for themselves...A lovely mix indeed...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Arturo.
Date: 4/7/2018 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay on your well deserved POTD honors for your exceptional Pantoum. Best wishes for a win..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 4/7/2018 4:00:00 PM
very cool
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Christopher.
Date: 4/7/2018 1:04:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD well deserved my friend. :))
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you again, Roy--appreciate your kind words.
Date: 4/7/2018 12:29:00 PM
- Congratulations, Vijay !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you again, Anne-Lise.
Date: 4/7/2018 11:48:00 AM
Lot of work went into this! Congratulastions!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you SW..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 4/7/2018 10:07:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 11:00:00 AM
Many thanks Eve--appreciate your support.
Date: 4/7/2018 10:06:00 AM
Amazing, Vijay, how you wove so many titles into this lovely poem! Congrats on it being honored as Poem Of The Day! Sandra
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 11:00:00 AM
Appreciate your visit and supportive words..many thanks Sandra.
Date: 4/7/2018 9:11:00 AM
Nice going Vijay, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 10:59:00 AM
Thank you Charlie..always appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 4/7/2018 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on potd my friend! Have a wonderful day Vijay :) xomo!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 10:59:00 AM
Thank you Maureen--appreciate your supportive words, my friend.
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