Daydreamer

Hello, I say to my one and only sweetest devotion 
Daydreamer, I know it was like a million years ago
When rolling in the deep, river Lea stirred emotion 
I miss you my hometown glory, but you don't know

Daydreamer, I know it was like a million years ago
I want to make you feel my love, I'm crazy for you
I miss you my hometown glory, but you don't know
Don't melt my heart to stone, our love is still true

I want to make you feel my love, I'm crazy for you
Why don't you remember, we set fire to the rain
Don't melt my heart to stone, our love is still true
All I ask is lay me down gently if it all ends in vain

Why don't you remember, we set fire to the rain
Rumor has it, someone like you dating my friend
All I ask is lay me down gently if it all ends in vain
Water under the bridge if we've hit the deadend

Rumor has it, someone like you dating my friend
Turning tables, allow me to confess, I found a boy
Water under the bridge if we've hit the deadend
Sweet like you when we were young, he's my joy

Turning tables, allow me to confess, I found a boy
Take it all, cooed my love in the dark, near skyfall
Sweet like you when we were young, he's my joy
He won't go there yet, but I'll be waiting for his call

Take it all, cooed my love in the dark, near skyfall
When rolling in the deep, river Lea stirred emotion 
He won't go there yet, but I'll be waiting for his call
Hello, I say to my one and only sweetest devotion 
	
April 5, 2018
First Place in Musical Pantoum contest by Silent One
Poem of the day on April 7, 2018

This poem includes the following 27 Adele titles:
All I ask                             Crazy for you                    Daydreamer
Don't you remember           He won't go                      Hello
Hometown glory                 I found a boy                    I miss you
I'll be waiting                     Lay me down                    Love in the dark
Make you feel my love        Melt my heart to stone       Million years ago            
One and only                     River lea                           Rolling in the deep         
Rumor has it                     Set fire to the rain              Skyfall      
Someone like you              Sweetest devotion              Take it all                        
Turning tables                   Water under the bridge       When we were young
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Raven Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Hi Vijay, you have used the Pantoum form so well. I love the content of this one my friend. You have created an excellent piece, incorporating your song titles. I always enjoy reading the Pantoum form. An excellent write Vijay. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Vijay, love your poem and how you wove so many song titles into this Pantoum! Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Back again with big congratulations on your Pantoum win for the contest... Hugs Eve
Sands Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
Pett Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:12 AM
back again with my congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, this is exceptionally clever and beautifully written, well done my friend. :))
Ashley Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 9:22 PM
Congratulations, Vijay, for your excellent win with your exceptional pantoum. Well crafted with awesome and creative use of the song titles. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ligon Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Great job fitting all those song titles into your pantoum so nicely. Congrats!
Gentry Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win in the music pentoum contest. Welldone.
Gentile Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Congrats on your top placement, Vijay Well Done !!
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:37 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the competition, a great music choice Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Hi Vijay, It's no surprise that you got such a high placement. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
One Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 11:56 AM
I think Adele is a great singer and you did her great justice with this great pantoum using all those titles.. amazing.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Sietesantos Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 9:53 AM
My friend, you are indeed a master of romantic poems and with this mix of Adele's song titles, you have again demonstrated your awesome talent! I expect to see this on the winners' list. Bravo! Hugs and love. Pandita
Kriticos Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 7:53 PM
I really enjoyed this you are a very deep poet my friend. Such well expressed thoughts are always enjoyable for me!
Pandit Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Kyle--always happy to read your feedback.
Leiser Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 11:52 PM
Great job doing all the titles in you well deserved POTD, Vijay! Congrats :)
Pandit Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Thank you Laura.
Michael Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 7:47 AM
You chose a queen...her song titles speak for themselves...A lovely mix indeed...All the best Vijay
Pandit Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Arturo.
Ashley Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 11:19 PM
Congratulations Vijay on your well deserved POTD honors for your exceptional Pantoum. Best wishes for a win..
Pandit Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Susan.
Quigley Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 4:00 PM
very cool
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Thank you Christopher.
Pett Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD well deserved my friend. :))
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thank you again, Roy--appreciate your kind words.
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 12:29 PM
- Congratulations, Vijay !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Thank you again, Anne-Lise.
Wanter Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Lot of work went into this! Congratulastions!
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Thank you SW..appreciate your kind feedback.
Roper Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Many thanks Eve--appreciate your support.
Haight Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Amazing, Vijay, how you wove so many titles into this lovely poem! Congrats on it being honored as Poem Of The Day! Sandra
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Appreciate your visit and supportive words..many thanks Sandra.
Smith Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Nice going Vijay, congratulations for POTD honors...
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Charlie..always appreciate your kind feedback.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on potd my friend! Have a wonderful day Vijay :) xomo!
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Maureen--appreciate your supportive words, my friend.
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