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Daydream

Daydream

      To dream and with imagination fill
      The long and unfulfilled waking hour
      And so by my thought’s abstract vision will
      Hour by hour unsatisfied time devour.
      To envisage in my now aroused mind
      My idle thoughts as in a picture formed,
      Where reality and illusion bind
      And my life’s course then by pretence transformed.
      To comprehend within my waking day
      Life lived in my ambition’s wishful schemes;
      Tomorrow within the compass of today
      And so today obscured by fruitless dreams.
      Until such hopeful pretences slowly fade
      And daydream’s fantasy is then unmade.

      
         17/01/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Martin Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 11:47 AM
The power of daydreams to take over your life. Great imagery! Congratulations Barry! :-)
Stebbings Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 1:01 PM
Thank you very much, Mark. // Barry
Krampe Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 7:54 PM
Congrats on your win, Barry.
Stebbings Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 3:34 PM
Thank you very much Agnes. // Barry.
Scars Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 1:29 PM
lovely sonnet Barry :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Stebbings Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 3:49 AM
Thank you for my win, Laura. // Barry
Babcock Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Nicely done on daydreaming. love phyl
Stebbings Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Thank you Phyllis. // Barry
White Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 2:49 AM
Shame you didn't enter the contest. Love hearing you read your poems.
Stebbings Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 3:15 AM
Thank you Darren. I did not enter because the contest asked for 'A Little Daydream' so I thought it was about a specific dream rather than the general.
Anish Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 12:01 AM
Nice take on daydreams. My latest is somewhat similar. Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish
Stebbings Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 1:01 PM
Thank you for commenting, Matthew. // Barry
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 11:02 AM
so heady i cling to each work.. fabulous, barry!..huggs
Stebbings Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Thank you very much, Nette. // Barry
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:31 PM
I like the profound way you did this theme. Very well done, Barry and good luck in the contest.
Stebbings Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 4:28 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea. // Barry
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 1:30 PM
Brilliant work Barry and best wishes...
Stebbings Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie. // Barry
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