Shadow Hamilton Poet Imagism

Daydream

She rolled down her silky sheer stockings
gives him a saucy sexy look,
imaging his hands there instead
gently coursing her trim figure.

Feels his eyes following his hands,
as she submits to her passion.
wishing that he could lay with her
as they transcended to heaven.

Alas it could never be, for he,
was only a marble statue.
Crafted by her, in memory
of the hours they once had shared

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Richard Lamoureux June 23, 2015 at 7:15 AM This is both passionate and sad.

M.N.I.W M.N.I.W June 1, 2015 at 7:41 PM Nice poem. The entire time I read, I could envision the words. Nice writing Shadow Hamilton June 5, 2015 at 2:30 PM ty m.n.i.w hugs

Darlene Gifford May 23, 2015 at 10:34 AM Dreams are the beginnings of seeing a poem there, as you have demonstrated here. Powerful and poignant. A 7 Shadow Hamilton May 23, 2015 at 4:14 PM ty Darlene hugs

M. L. Kiser May 1, 2015 at 6:54 AM A truly beautiful poem. Shadow Hamilton May 3, 2015 at 2:35 AM ty ML hugs

Ralph Sergi April 30, 2015 at 1:30 PM Beautifully done, Shadow. And a very creative daydream. Shadow Hamilton May 3, 2015 at 2:34 AM ty Ralph hugs

Emile Pinet April 29, 2015 at 1:42 PM This poem was innovative, captivating, and three dimensional in character. Emile. Shadow Hamilton May 3, 2015 at 2:34 AM ty Emile hugs

Kelly Deschler April 27, 2015 at 7:08 PM Daydreams are real until we open our eyes and see the painful truth... A very sad, but moving write. Really great work, Shadow! Shadow Hamilton May 3, 2015 at 2:33 AM ty Kelly hugs

Jerry T Curtis April 26, 2015 at 8:54 PM Well Done Shadow Shadow Hamilton April 27, 2015 at 3:02 AM ty Jerry hugs