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Robins move quickly across the fresh spring grass gathering foliage for a newly woven nest Church bells can be heard chiming rhythmically out in the distant west Vibrant tulips, lily's and orchids are exploding in the garden arousing sensuous scents of jasmine and rose as a gentle breeze tickles my nose The sun sprinkles sunshine off the glistening dew bringing me a smile and thoughts of you Your warm and loving heart like the perfect cloudless day Your sweet and tender touch taking all my breath away I sit here enjoying this glorious sight daydreaming of sharing with you my night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/3/2015 9:15:00 PM
Wow I love what Arthur said. A stunning poem!
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Date: 4/3/2015 8:47:00 PM
If a picture says a thousand words, your romantic poems express a thousand pictures!
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Date: 4/2/2015 8:58:00 PM
7 Robins move quickly across the fresh spring grass!!! That is the first bird I saw when I walked my Peanut yesterday just doing that, then he flew up on the tree just singing away. i stood there watching him or her for awhile. Happy Easter dear friend
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Date: 4/2/2015 3:19:00 PM
Hi Tim, this is the lovliest daydream, and reads like a man who has come down with a nasty case of Spring fever! A very enjoyable read and a def *7* for me. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 4/2/2015 2:30:00 PM
A beautiful, tender daydream, Tim! Happy Easter...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 4/2/2015 1:10:00 PM
Tim, I love your romantic "Daydream"
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Date: 4/2/2015 10:21:00 AM
Such lovely write coming from a man...your wife must be feeling lovelier each time she reads your lines like these, Tim. A 7. May you share more years dreaming, daydreaming even well after empty nest...KIM :0
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Date: 4/2/2015 8:34:00 AM
I am writing a poem for my daughter and there are orchids included: ).We were both thinking same things.What a beautiful bouquet of flowers.What fragrance of sweet romance.It brings spring on my doorstep .a favourite!
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Date: 4/2/2015 3:39:00 AM
To use some of your own words, Tim...this is an explosion of romantic sentiments, wrapped in captivating imagery. The appeal to the senses is so powerful. A perfect poem to herald in the month of April! #7 All the best. // paul
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Date: 4/1/2015 10:35:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Tim,, and the last lines say it all! How it turns to be a sweet romantic ,, amazing!!
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:36:00 PM
Timmy, you are the romantic---A word of warning to you though---be careful saying such things around women, they tend to like it, lol
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:20:00 PM
Great write Tim! This is what I call a beautiful day. Great imagery.
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:07:00 PM
How absolutely romantic and sweet, Tim....Lovely
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Eileen...hugs Tim
Date: 4/1/2015 5:50:00 PM
sounds idyllic Tim I love the wonderful imagery:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/1/2015 5:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan. We finally had some beautiful weather today...hugs Tim