Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Daydream

Robins move quickly across the fresh spring grass

gathering foliage for a newly woven nest

Church bells can be heard chiming 

rhythmically out in the distant west

Vibrant tulips, lily's and orchids

are exploding in the garden 

arousing sensuous scents of jasmine and rose

as a gentle breeze tickles my nose

The sun sprinkles sunshine off the glistening dew

bringing me a smile and thoughts of you 

Your warm and loving heart

like the perfect cloudless day

Your sweet and tender touch

taking all my breath away

I sit here enjoying this glorious sight

daydreaming of sharing with you my night

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Maurice Yvonne April 3, 2015 at 9:15 PM Wow I love what Arthur said. A stunning poem!

Arthur Vaso April 3, 2015 at 8:47 PM If a picture says a thousand words, your romantic poems express a thousand pictures!

Eve Roper April 2, 2015 at 8:58 PM 7 Robins move quickly across the fresh spring grass!!! That is the first bird I saw when I walked my Peanut yesterday just doing that, then he flew up on the tree just singing away. i stood there watching him or her for awhile. Happy Easter dear friend

Kim Shaw April 2, 2015 at 3:19 PM Hi Tim, this is the lovliest daydream, and reads like a man who has come down with a nasty case of Spring fever! A very enjoyable read and a def *7* for me. Hugs, Kimberly

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 2, 2015 at 2:30 PM A beautiful, tender daydream, Tim! Happy Easter...hugs, Rhonda

Kp Nunez April 2, 2015 at 10:21 AM Such lovely write coming from a man...your wife must be feeling lovelier each time she reads your lines like these, Tim. A 7. May you share more years dreaming, daydreaming even well after empty nest...KIM :0

Charmaine Chircop April 2, 2015 at 8:34 AM I am writing a poem for my daughter and there are orchids included: ).We were both thinking same things.What a beautiful bouquet of flowers.What fragrance of sweet romance.It brings spring on my doorstep .a favourite!

Paul Callus April 2, 2015 at 3:39 AM To use some of your own words, Tim...this is an explosion of romantic sentiments, wrapped in captivating imagery. The appeal to the senses is so powerful. A perfect poem to herald in the month of April! #7 All the best. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 1, 2015 at 10:35 PM Wonderful imagery Tim,, and the last lines say it all! How it turns to be a sweet romantic ,, amazing!!

Jerry T Curtis April 1, 2015 at 8:36 PM Timmy, you are the romantic---A word of warning to you though---be careful saying such things around women, they tend to like it, lol

Tammy Reams April 1, 2015 at 7:20 PM Great write Tim! This is what I call a beautiful day. Great imagery.

Eileen Manassian April 1, 2015 at 6:07 PM How absolutely romantic and sweet, Tim....Lovely Tim Smith April 1, 2015 at 6:09 PM Thanks Eileen...hugs Tim

Jan Allison April 1, 2015 at 5:50 PM sounds idyllic Tim I love the wonderful imagery:-) Hugs jan xx Tim Smith April 1, 2015 at 5:54 PM Thanks Jan. We finally had some beautiful weather today...hugs Tim