Daydream

Red rambling roses.
Pink parading  pansies
Yellow yawning ylang ylang
Scarlet shining strawberries

Gorgeous growing gardenias
Beautiful bending bracken
Lovely lilting lilies
Attractive ambling agapanthus 

Carefully crafted
Meticulously maintained
Fastidiously fashioned
Delightful daydream
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Suzanne Delaney

November 20, 2015 at 1:13 AM

What a fun and pretty poem. Glad I encountered it today, Cheers, SuZ

Shane Cooper

November 20, 2015 at 1:47 AM

Thanks for stopping in Suzanne, Alliteration is a favourite form of mine. love Shane xxx

Connie Marcum Wong

March 25, 2015 at 4:00 AM

Spring in all its colorful glory is depicted in this pleasing poem Shane. Lovely!

Shane Cooper

March 25, 2015 at 4:05 AM

Thanks Connie, it is one of my favourites. Have a wonderful day

Cona Adams

January 23, 2015 at 10:14 AM

Wow, Shane. That third line of verse one is a tongue twister. Delightful. I am an avid gardener, so this was my cup of tea.

Cona Adams

January 23, 2015 at 1:41 PM

So runs the path of great poetry.

Shane Cooper

January 23, 2015 at 10:52 AM

I glad you liked it I started to write something completely different and this just fell onto the page instead. Shane xxx

Seren Roberts

January 6, 2015 at 11:21 AM

wow I do like this haven't tried that form I don't think, you have me thinking now....Seren

Shane Cooper

January 6, 2015 at 6:48 PM

Hi i wrote it after reading some of Jan's alliteration poems which are brilliant. thanks for stopping to read it is appreciated. love shane

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 3, 2015 at 5:35 AM

- A truly beautiful dream, Shane - The biggest adventure you can experience is to live the life you dream about - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

January 2, 2015 at 4:52 PM

Wow Shane you have blown my sock off - this rocks my friend brilliant imagery and alliteration in one go - woohoo so glad i inspired you t have a go:-) Its a 7 and into favourites for me Shane:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

January 2, 2015 at 5:02 PM

I have learned so much in 10 months Shane - I wrote the snowflakes one in the pub last Saturday whilst listening to some very depressing blues music - wasn't a great place for me to be so I decided to write and Scintillating Snowflakes was the result - alliteration makes a poem flow so nicely I don't usually do a poem just of that form but was very pleased with the result:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

January 2, 2015 at 4:57 PM

Thanks i could not have written without reading your work, i shall show my ignorance and say i did not know what allieration was unitl i looked up your poems, with 450 to choose from i get lost reading for hours.

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