Daydream

fog drifts in and out of present tense daydream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 3:06 PM
ok, back where I started. Next time I have to remember to begin with those numbered ones! see ya, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 2:58 PM
wow, you have some great haiku collection here. this one was new for me.
Minney Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 7:15 AM
Powerful and descriptive. Well done.
Situation Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 9:11 AM
nicely put
May Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 12:45 PM
very nicely done Ann... thanks for visiting and sharing ....always...Joseph
Situation Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 11:47 PM
not a haiku.
Grisetti Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:40 AM
Very well crafted haiku.
Austin Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 3:53 PM
This is the reason I got mediocre grades in school. Love, daver
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