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Daybreak Resets My World

the day is about to rise
and again i could not sleep --
i breathe in the freshness of the morn

and in the stillness of this air
emerges from yonder the horizon
a hush aglow that calls to me

it's calming, it's soothing
like a voice i recognize from afar
almost music to my ear

and for a graceful moment i’m hypnotized:
two eagles soar across the sky and suddenly
the world seems to me in perfect harmony



AP: 1st place 2023

photo taken by Chandana Ramachandran
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kaufman Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 5:26 AM
Hi Line, This is such a lovely write. It seems like nature gave you a reset. I hope you are sleeping better these days.
Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Nancy.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 9:06 AM
wow, a real beauty. Line. Congrats
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 3:36 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~ much appreciated
Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 10:04 AM
A lovely write/picture. "DAYBREAK" so beautiful with each new day giving us a new start. Have a blessed day.................
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Much appreciated, thanks Paula ~
Peck Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Ahh, so lovely, Line. I especially love your last three lines. So beautiful, they gave me hope.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 11:50 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Ann ~
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