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the day is about to rise and again i could not sleep -- i breathe in the freshness of the morn and in the stillness of this air emerges from yonder the horizon a hush aglow that calls to me it's calming, it's soothing like a voice i recognize from afar almost music to my ear and for a graceful moment i’m hypnotized: two eagles soar across the sky and suddenly the world seems to me in perfect harmony AP: 1st place 2023 Submitted on April 5, 2023 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE NO.1206 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on March 28, 2023 photo taken by Chandana Ramachandran

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Date: 4/16/2023 5:26:00 AM
Hi Line, This is such a lovely write. It seems like nature gave you a reset. I hope you are sleeping better these days.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2023 8:07:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Nancy.
Date: 4/8/2023 9:06:00 AM
wow, a real beauty. Line. Congrats
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Date: 4/8/2023 3:36:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~ much appreciated
Date: 3/29/2023 10:04:00 AM
A lovely write/picture. "DAYBREAK" so beautiful with each new day giving us a new start. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 3/30/2023 11:49:00 AM
Much appreciated, thanks Paula ~
Date: 3/28/2023 2:45:00 PM
Ahh, so lovely, Line. I especially love your last three lines. So beautiful, they gave me hope.
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Date: 3/30/2023 11:50:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Ann ~

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