Daybreak

Daybreak,
eyelids open
creating a playground,
filled with an endless enchantment,
rebirth.

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

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March 25, 2010 at 11:41 AM
I am so happy to see your poem amongst the ones I am reading today Caryl. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration and hope for a better tomorrow. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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March 25, 2010 at 12:44 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Caryl.Rgds Brian
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March 25, 2010 at 12:04 AM
OOh, I like this a lot. "Rebirth"...wonderful.
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March 24, 2010 at 8:57 PM
Very cool, CAryl!! I like your thinking. LUv, Andrea
Frew Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 8:17 PM
great one Caryl!thanx
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