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Daybreak

Dawn breaks and soon the light dilutes the dark, The lazy sun climbs high to make her mark. Her slow awakening, lighting up the sky, As tomtits flit and tweet their morning cry. The crouching pheasant colours dawns first breath And stealthily appears from night times death. The wood mouse noses from his hidden hollow As like the cock bird, knows, his time is borrowed. The roebuck hiding deep in dawns damp hue, Steps out, to graze, against a wall of blue. The sun continues warming winters grasp And bumbling badgers find repose at last.

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Date: 3/10/2021 2:11:00 PM
Hi Nicola, Your poem is simply amazing. Thanks for your comment on my work. Howard
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Nicola Davidson
Date: 4/2/2021 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Howard
Date: 10/22/2020 5:44:00 PM
A lovely write Nicola, thank you for the visit and your kind words..
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Nicola Davidson
Date: 10/23/2020 4:41:00 AM
Many thanks Joseph
Date: 10/22/2020 9:56:00 AM
Some lovely restful imagery here. Congratulations on your win, too :)
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Nicola Davidson
Date: 10/22/2020 10:14:00 AM
Many thanks Sarah
Date: 10/21/2020 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nicola. Hugs Eve
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Nicola Davidson
Date: 10/21/2020 6:28:00 PM
Thank you Eve x
Date: 10/21/2020 6:22:00 PM
This is simply delightful, nicola, a joy to behold. Lovely imagery and turns of phrase... and congrats on your placement in the contest! Write on, please! Thanks, Gershon
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Nicola Davidson
Date: 10/21/2020 6:29:00 PM
So kind as always Gershon Thanks so much
Date: 10/21/2020 1:02:00 PM
Didnt realise this was for my contest when i originally commented.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Nicola Davidson
Date: 10/21/2020 1:53:00 PM
Thank you very much...lovely surprise
Date: 10/21/2020 5:35:00 AM
Lovely imagery throughout your poem Nicola...
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Nicola Davidson
Date: 10/21/2020 6:43:00 AM
Thank you

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