Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Free verse

Daybreak

Trillions of stars failed 
to dispel the dark.
Opacity pervaded
like a dark blanket.

The routine pursuits of 
the fauna adjourned 
and they remained
dormant and  indolent 
except the nocturnal.
                
A sumptuous daybreak,  
healing rays of aurora,
a turmoil and somnolence,
soak in heat and perk up,             
pulse of life quickens.


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Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
Date: 25/07/2020

winner: 1st place

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Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2020 at 1:40 PM Pretty! A sumptuous daybreak, healing rays of aurora! Patri Venkata Ramana July 29, 2020 at 7:40 PM Thanks for your compliments

Aditi Mishra July 28, 2020 at 12:45 PM This muse is a visual treat with those soothing references. Congratulations on your win :) Patri Venkata Ramana July 29, 2020 at 7:39 PM Thanks for your Compliments.

Janice Canerdy July 28, 2020 at 9:32 AM Patri, this is a very lovely WINNING poem. Janice Patri Venkata Ramana July 29, 2020 at 7:39 PM Thanks for your compliments.

Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 9:06 PM Congrats on your win!:) Patri Venkata Ramana July 27, 2020 at 8:56 AM Thanks a lot for your compliments.