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Daybreak

Trillions of stars failed to dispel the dark. Opacity pervaded like a dark blanket. The routine pursuits of the fauna adjourned and they remained dormant and indolent except the nocturnal. A sumptuous daybreak, healing rays of aurora, a turmoil and somnolence, soak in heat and perk up, pulse of life quickens. STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (13), any form, any theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date: 25/07/2020 winner: 1st place

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Date: 7/28/2020 1:40:00 PM
Pretty! A sumptuous daybreak, healing rays of aurora!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/29/2020 7:40:00 PM
Thanks for your compliments
Date: 7/28/2020 12:45:00 PM
This muse is a visual treat with those soothing references. Congratulations on your win :)
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/29/2020 7:39:00 PM
Thanks for your Compliments.
Date: 7/28/2020 9:32:00 AM
Patri, this is a very lovely WINNING poem. Janice
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/29/2020 7:39:00 PM
Thanks for your compliments.
Date: 7/26/2020 9:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win!:)
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/27/2020 8:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your compliments.

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