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Daybreak

natures alarm clock
heralds the start of daybreak ~
a cockerel crows 


Written 27 th April 2020

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/11/2020 6:45:00 PM

Perfect Tom.....and he is helped by the kookaburras, miss those sounds.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/12/2020 4:26:00 AM

Thanks Suzanne, sounds like you've moved from the countryside to a town or city, I moved from the city to a country town, I have no regrets. Tom

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/5/2020 11:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Haiku. I would like to hear music. Enjoy your day and win..........

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/6/2020 2:14:00 AM

Thank you very much Paula, happy you enjoyed it. Stay safe Tom

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/5/2020 10:45:00 PM

Happy Cinco de Mayo and sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Tom - keep up the great work! I hope you are staying safe and sound, My Friend - blessings! :o)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/6/2020 2:19:00 AM

Thank you Greg, and to you too, I always think of that as Mexico Rorkes Drift. Hope you're well, stay safe too. Tom

L. J. Carber

Date: 5/5/2020 1:13:00 PM

A lovely haiku Tom--congrats!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/5/2020 1:20:00 PM

Thank you L. J. Hope you are well Tom

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/5/2020 10:52:00 AM

Really nice haiku Tom. Love the image of "nature's alarm clock!" Congratulations on your win! Hope you are well. Blessings. Over Fork Over!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/5/2020 12:24:00 PM

Thank you very much Sam, was woken many times by that clock lol. Over Fork Over. Stay safe. Tom

Gideon Idudje

Date: 5/5/2020 8:40:00 AM

Ah! Nature at its best Blended veracity

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/5/2020 9:01:00 AM

Thank you Gideon, Tom

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/5/2020 7:39:00 AM

Words placed perfectly! Congratulations, Tom!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/5/2020 7:45:00 AM

Thank you Kim, a nice surprise hope you're well. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/2/2020 10:18:00 AM

What would we do without our first cup of coffee in the morning, of course if it is accompanied with the smell of cooking bacon, well that is perfect! Lovely poem, and such true words! Blessings, Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/2/2020 12:59:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, best way to start the day, bacon mmmm now you're talking. Hope you're well. Tom

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/30/2020 7:47:00 AM

Which reminds me. "coffee on the boil" is about to start here.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/30/2020 10:05:00 AM

Thanks Caren, best way to start the day. Tom

Funom Makama

Date: 4/29/2020 10:35:00 PM

Fascinating lines.. This is awesome, so awesome.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/29/2020 11:02:00 PM

Thank you Funom, happy you enjoyed it. Stay safe Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/28/2020 1:45:00 PM

Hello Tom, yes the rooster is mother nature's alarm clock. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/28/2020 5:19:00 PM

Hello Tom yes sometimes more reliable than a mechanical ones. Yes I am well thank youand I hope that you are to. Be safe. enjoy your evening my friend.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/28/2020 4:30:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, and sometimes more reliable than a mechanical one lol. Hope you're well, stay safe. Tom