Daybreak

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RISE ... breathless, calm ... I face the morn ... possibility mists crawl 'neath gangling willows dew drawn from the keening hem of twilight spattered on green and growth like atomized sachet patient for the sun and its timid truths as I listen for the silent cry a new day's glory ... soft-born. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Brian's Choice Y, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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John Hamilton

Date: 7/31/2019 3:38:00 PM

Wonderful imagery G I've run out of superlatives.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/31/2019 7:55:00 PM

Just your comments mean a lot, John, not always WHAT you say, but that you take the time to say something. Blessings and thanks, my good friend! :o)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/10/2019 9:31:00 AM

Soft born...I like that! Ahh

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/10/2019 7:06:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim - blessings! :-) <3