Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

Day One

Day 1 is when you winked at me
Day 2 I saw you grin
Day 3 is when you blew a kiss
Day 4 went out for a spin
Day 5 is when you held my hand
Day 6 gave me a kiss
Day 7 I gave up being coy
Day 8 …well, that was sheer bliss
Day 9 we looked at the stars
Day 10 swam in the sea
Day 11 I cooked you a meal
Day 12 you ravished me
Day 13 we had our first fight 
Day 14 we didn’t speak
Day 15 we kissed and made up
Day 16 you made me weak
Day 17, 18, and 19 
They all started to blur
Day 20 is when you said to me
“Be my forever girl!”

Now we are just counting years
And counting young’uns too
If I had to do it all again
I’d start Day 1 with YOU!

For PD's Day One Contest

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Len Gasun July 7, 2013 at 10:10 AM Wow! I love this so much my dear friend, Eileen! MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WELL-DESERVED SUPER WIN! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora Eileen Manassian July 9, 2013 at 3:46 AM Wow...thanks for this sweet post. :) I'm so happy to have read it. Hugs..

Donna Jones July 6, 2013 at 9:31 PM Congratulations sweetie...loved reading it again...have had a grand holiday...hope you are well

Cecilia Macfarlane July 6, 2013 at 3:06 PM Eileen, a most delightful read my dear.....love your romantic and playful side. Big Congrats! Hugs

Skat A July 6, 2013 at 2:24 PM nice....skat Eileen Manassian July 6, 2013 at 2:26 PM :) Thanks, dearie!

Bl Devnath July 6, 2013 at 9:21 AM Congrats on your win with this wonderful poem. Loved always, bl Eileen Manassian July 6, 2013 at 9:28 AM Thanks ever so much, ML. You are always kind and encouraging.

Judy Konos July 6, 2013 at 6:07 AM Eileen's a STAR! WHOOPEE..CONGRATULATIONS! Eileen Manassian July 6, 2013 at 9:30 AM WOW! Music to my ears!!!!!!! :) :) :) Love ya, Judy.....

Suzanne Delaney July 6, 2013 at 1:38 AM This is fun Congratulations on your many wins. You ar a star, dear one. SuZ Eileen Manassian July 6, 2013 at 9:31 AM Oh, Suz....thank you and bless you for saying that. I'm flying high! HUGS!!!

Poet Destroyer A July 5, 2013 at 11:24 PM E, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda

Shirley Candy July 5, 2013 at 10:47 PM Excellent poem!! I enjoyed every word of it. Congratulations on your awesome win, Eileen :))) Eileen Manassian July 6, 2013 at 9:28 AM Very sweet of you, Shirley. Glad you could connect with it! :) I love that you LOVE IT! Shirley Candy July 5, 2013 at 10:49 PM +Fave this one. Love itttttttttttt... :)))

Ilene Bauer June 29, 2013 at 7:12 AM perfect! love it! Eileen Manassian June 29, 2013 at 7:15 AM Thanks, Ilene. You are too kind! I'm not complaining...I'm happy! You've always been a great support to me...HUGS!

Richard Lamoureux June 29, 2013 at 12:46 AM Hi Eileen, see my response to your comment. Signing off, almost midnight. Eileen Manassian June 29, 2013 at 7:14 AM I did, Richard. I responded. Good morning to you. Hope you have a good day. Richard Lamoureux June 29, 2013 at 12:47 AM Have a great day. Hugs Rick

Richard Ferry June 28, 2013 at 10:59 PM good luck in contest Eileen Manassian June 29, 2013 at 1:43 PM Thanks! :) I had fun writing this...It's a silly little thing, so we will see how it goes!

Skat A June 28, 2013 at 10:38 PM oh wow! now that's what I call a day one poem........ start from the first time, you recall that one very moment....... Eileen, I love the poem. and you counting the young one's wow. to the ending. a perfect 10 poem. you went all sweet at the end. I am in awe'ssssssss ~SKAT~ Eileen Manassian June 29, 2013 at 1:44 PM SKAT....thank you, my dear. I'm touched by this post of yours! A PERFECT 10, you say? Let's see how we do on the contest. Hugs!

Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2013 at 8:23 PM It's to bad it's fiction, I was cheering by the end of it. You did a fabulous job, a creative take on the contest. Hugs Rick Eileen Manassian June 29, 2013 at 1:45 PM Thanks....wanted to make sure everyone knew that ravished on day 12 just wouldn't happen!!!! He'd have to work more for it than that! :)

Eileen Manassian June 28, 2013 at 7:37 PM This is purely fictional, friends......

Richard D Seal June 28, 2013 at 7:23 PM Very clever write myLittle desert Orchid, hope this does well for you. A whole twelve days eh lol. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian June 29, 2013 at 1:46 PM I hope so too, my dear. YEA....day twelve was a doozy! ;) Had to be an even number.....Hugs!

Donna Jones June 28, 2013 at 5:36 PM Oh.....many more happy years and no tears....good luck sweetie..bet it's a winner Eileen Manassian June 29, 2013 at 1:47 PM Thanks, MD. You have a very strong poem in this contest. It has a deep meaning. This was just a little bit of a fun write with the days! I've learned never to bet on anything! Hugs!

Russell Sivey June 28, 2013 at 2:14 PM This is beautiful, I really enjoyed reading this phenomenal write this afternoon! What a tremendous poem my friend! You have painted a glorious piece, one that was easily envisioned by me! Great Work!! Eileen Manassian June 29, 2013 at 1:48 PM :) Glad you could envision it.....Not day 12, eh? ;) Thanks for visiting and posting, Russell.

Heather Ober June 28, 2013 at 12:56 PM SO SWEET! This one brought a huge smile to my face!! Eileen Manassian June 29, 2013 at 1:50 PM And a pretty smile it is cutie pie!