Day Off

O glorious day off it's you that I've sought you are the payoff of a week, hard fought You fill me with cheer after many a mile And now that you're here I awake with a smile

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/31/2018 8:44:00 PM

So simple and happy. I love it.

Michael Wise
Date: 1/1/2019 6:57:00 AM

Many thanks! :)

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/31/2018 6:26:00 PM

enjoy! well done!

Michael Wise
Date: 12/31/2018 7:14:00 PM

Thank u! :)

Ed Morris

Date: 12/31/2018 1:09:00 PM

Hear, hear! :-)

Ed Morris
Date: 1/1/2019 12:20:00 AM

To cheer the new year. :-)

Michael Wise
Date: 12/31/2018 1:30:00 PM

Let's have a beer! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/31/2018 10:45:00 AM

Perfectly said. I do think the two days off is much more exciting than a bunch of days off. Somehow more rewarding. It is hilarious that sometimes on Saturday I wake up with a start thinking I am late to work though, not a smile.

Michael Wise
Date: 12/31/2018 11:14:00 AM

There were a few times when I was still in school where I woke up on an occasional Saturday thinking I had to get ready for school! :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/31/2018 9:40:00 AM

Ha! Sweet :)))

Michael Wise
Date: 12/31/2018 10:03:00 AM

And short! Thank u! :)