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Day Marches On

On and on day marches on 
until the sun is nearly gone 
Yes the battle is always won 
I know cuz when day is done 
moon puts her crescent on 
and proffers up, the sun.
Mystic Rose  5/20/2019

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Date: 5/20/2019 4:02:00 PM
I like the smooth flow of the rhymes here, especially the elegance of the last line!
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Date: 5/20/2019 2:23:00 PM
and so it is, the cycle of a day revered by the pleasure of your kind heart, vie... mellow, mellow you!... huggs
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