Day In The Life Of A Donkey Part One

In retrospect  the couple nigel and nigella were reflecting on their mosaic life that transcended the  freakish.
In a mist drenched and fluctuating sun dispersed town with scant employment, and that plethora of minimal short term contract work.
The apparently genial and eccentric inhabitants were in a quintessential jokes and capers quandary.
Dark grey shale ribbed stone  stark dwellings one felt might collapse with a finger prod but didn’t quite!
Yet!
Windows bear the tarnished realm of conformity that might stifle atmospheres but didn’t quench drole alignment.
Streets that wove interstitially whose most elevated distinctive  mark was its ennui on rewind. 
A laughable yet solemn cliquish hub wedged in between a brambled array of disrupted forest leaf wilt and rabid limp green wet knotted pastures.
Nigella had a short story shortlisted in a dimlit attic of a  local newspaper  with the title A day in the life of a donkey.
Nigel was a  junior cast member in a fringe drama on a meagre shoestring budget  that had now you see it now don’t  short run then vanished without the most minimal of warnings.
Based on this animal pet theme.
Perhaps the portrayal might have been a tad gauche and slapdash in its delivery.
The humour  a little too corny even thorny  for seats scattered like seeds  audience in  an overshadowed, out of the way, dust speck  town which simultaneously seemed to be playing reuse second fiddle in the context of up to date innovations.
There was also the  tantalising magnetic lure of a major urban catchment area and its kinetic glow where there now appeared to be a perceptible impulsive swing  away from this midget type village or small town yet somehow dense area that was at once a mortise lock gazing in on itself yet had this twist and turn yen to expand exponentially. 
“Strange that day, Nigel, you know when I saw that donkey in the field.
It was a bumpy field very uneven, it was raised, elevated and had this tilt. 
Most unusual, it  had  this human facet, almost as if it   was on the verge of peering down on the village.”
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 2:37 PM
I enjoyed reading this first write of the story. Have a great day writing more.........
Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 5:27 AM
Well, with animals, one never knows for sure if we are watching them or are they watching us. I think the animals know way more than us. It reads as though Nigel and Nigella need to more to a larger village with a little more life that is what I perceive from the story, but who knows but what something good might be going to happen. . LOL..Sara K
Kerr Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 5:43 AM
The time you have taken and the care involved in your reflections on this work are so important to me. Valuable insights too on animals being so perceptive. Lol and best wishes Howard
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 11:11 AM
Hmmm. This seems to be introduction to the story itself. I will read continuing segments day to day. The last line describing the field in relation to the village is superb
Kerr Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 11:54 AM
Indeed this segment is the introductory part of my story. Your compliments are always appreciated. Thanks for reading this, Andrea, Howard
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