Day In, Day Out

Red sun wake up from night's bed
Wash and lit up his bright head
When will he gets an off day?
Day in, day out he works dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Great example , Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Thank you Eve..
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:36 PM
awesome conclusion on your model jueju , Jenish. I love that line "he works dead"
Somadas Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 10:18 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Wolf Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 3:55 PM
Haha. Day off for the sun? ~ Frozen world. ~ Sun-worshiper
Somadas Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 10:18 PM
Lol.. How happy you are hearing a day off..
La France Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Jenish, great example for your contest, using just one syllable words will make it more of a challenge and give your soul a day to rest _Constance,
Somadas Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 1:53 PM
Lol..Thank you Constance.. Have a great day..
Lamoureux Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Sometimes work can be soul sucking. Beautiful photo Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 1:52 PM
Yes, sometimes.. Thank you Richard..
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