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Day In, Day Out

Red sun wake up from night's bed Wash and lit up his bright head When will he gets an off day? Day in, day out he works dead.

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Date: 3/12/2020 6:11:00 PM

Great example , Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 10:58:00 PM

Thank you Eve..

Date: 3/9/2020 4:36:00 PM

awesome conclusion on your model jueju , Jenish. I love that line "he works dead"

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/9/2020 10:18:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..

Date: 3/9/2020 3:55:00 PM

Haha. Day off for the sun? ~ Frozen world. ~ Sun-worshiper

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/9/2020 10:18:00 PM

Lol.. How happy you are hearing a day off..

Date: 3/9/2020 10:26:00 AM

Jenish, great example for your contest, using just one syllable words will make it more of a challenge and give your soul a day to rest _Constance,

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/9/2020 1:53:00 PM

Lol..Thank you Constance.. Have a great day..

Date: 3/9/2020 9:16:00 AM

Sometimes work can be soul sucking. Beautiful photo Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/9/2020 1:52:00 PM

Yes, sometimes.. Thank you Richard..