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Day Dreaming of You

Days spent thinking of you Always I can see you Your presence I can feel Dreams while awake Reaching out for you Each time you slip away Abandoned I feel and lost Many times I smell you It clusters around me Now settling , and the Good memories flood in Onwards alone I go Free yet never free You are part of me Only hidden by the veil Until it parts I wait for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/11/2013 12:04:00 AM
This is sure very emotional and lovely write my dear SH. Well done~A.O
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/11/2013 4:32:00 PM
hi AO and ty I do enjoy acrostics pleased you like it Shadow x
Date: 6/8/2013 7:14:00 PM
This is a very lovely & sweet poem my dear friend Shadow. I love it and so enjoy reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time reading some of my poems & wonderful comments. Sorry for the late expression of thanks. Have a great weekend! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/9/2013 4:15:00 AM
Leonora so kind ty I do like acrostic poems you enjoy the W/E too Shadow x
Date: 6/8/2013 10:44:00 AM
This is the essence of love: Dreams while awake, Free yet never free. Beautyful
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/8/2013 12:35:00 PM
Mario ty so much much appreciated Shadow
Date: 6/8/2013 5:30:00 AM
Love it Shadow xx
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/8/2013 12:35:00 PM
so kind of you Mandy ty Shadow
Date: 6/7/2013 7:10:00 PM
Welcome to Soup so nice to read your work this evening. Light & Love
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Date: 6/8/2013 4:55:00 AM
ty Debbie for taking time to read x
Date: 6/7/2013 2:53:00 PM
this is so nice. The allusion to the veil makes me think of something in my religion. Is it significant for you that way?
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/8/2013 4:58:00 AM
ty Andrea I am not religious in usual way. I follow mother natures ways. ty for reading. Shadow
Date: 6/7/2013 1:37:00 PM
Dearest Shadow a beautiful Acrostic!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/7/2013 2:19:00 PM
dear Demetrious ty for kind comment Shadow x
Date: 6/7/2013 11:23:00 AM
Reminds me a little of the hit song of yesteryear by Aretha Franklin. Good write.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/7/2013 11:34:00 AM
hope that's a good remind lol Robert. ty kindly Shadow
Date: 6/7/2013 7:58:00 AM
A heart holding onto memories & wants. The need for more is seeping between the lines here. Awesome job!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/7/2013 11:34:00 AM
ty kindly Drake lovely comment Shadow x
Date: 6/7/2013 6:59:00 AM
One word...''fANTASTIC''
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/7/2013 7:43:00 AM
high praise from you dearest friend I am honoured Shadow xox

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