Shadow Hamilton Poet Acrostic

Day Dreaming of You

Days spent thinking of you

   Always I can see you

      Your presence I can feel


Dreams while awake

   Reaching out for you

      Each time you slip away

         Abandoned I feel and lost

             Many times I smell you

                 It clusters around me

                     Now settling , and the

                        Good memories flood in


Onwards alone I go

   Free yet never free
 

You are part of me

    Only hidden by the veil

        Until it parts I wait for you

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole June 11, 2013 at 12:04 AM This is sure very emotional and lovely write my dear SH. Well done~A.O Shadow Hamilton June 11, 2013 at 4:32 PM hi AO and ty I do enjoy acrostics pleased you like it Shadow x

Len Gasun June 8, 2013 at 7:14 PM This is a very lovely & sweet poem my dear friend Shadow. I love it and so enjoy reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time reading some of my poems & wonderful comments. Sorry for the late expression of thanks. Have a great weekend! love and big hugs, Leonora Shadow Hamilton June 9, 2013 at 4:15 AM Leonora so kind ty I do like acrostic poems you enjoy the W/E too Shadow x

Mario De Paz June 8, 2013 at 10:44 AM This is the essence of love: Dreams while awake, Free yet never free. Beautyful Shadow Hamilton June 8, 2013 at 12:35 PM Mario ty so much much appreciated Shadow

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 8, 2013 at 5:30 AM Love it Shadow xx Shadow Hamilton June 8, 2013 at 12:35 PM so kind of you Mandy ty Shadow

Debbie Guzzi June 7, 2013 at 7:10 PM Welcome to Soup so nice to read your work this evening. Light & Love Shadow Hamilton June 8, 2013 at 4:55 AM ty Debbie for taking time to read x

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2013 at 2:53 PM this is so nice. The allusion to the veil makes me think of something in my religion. Is it significant for you that way? Shadow Hamilton June 8, 2013 at 4:58 AM ty Andrea I am not religious in usual way. I follow mother natures ways. ty for reading. Shadow

Demetrios Trifiatis June 7, 2013 at 1:37 PM Dearest Shadow a beautiful Acrostic! Shadow Hamilton June 7, 2013 at 2:19 PM dear Demetrious ty for kind comment Shadow x

Robert Pettit June 7, 2013 at 11:23 AM Reminds me a little of the hit song of yesteryear by Aretha Franklin. Good write. Shadow Hamilton June 7, 2013 at 11:34 AM hope that's a good remind lol Robert. ty kindly Shadow

Poet Tacito June 7, 2013 at 7:58 AM A heart holding onto memories & wants. The need for more is seeping between the lines here. Awesome job! Shadow Hamilton June 7, 2013 at 11:34 AM ty kindly Drake lovely comment Shadow x

Mustapha Mohammed June 7, 2013 at 6:59 AM One word...''fANTASTIC'' Shadow Hamilton June 7, 2013 at 7:43 AM high praise from you dearest friend I am honoured Shadow xox