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Day Dreaming

the red glow so far away so close, embraced the burst of innervated dawn restraining its awe the uplift of a lemony-spring sponge-squeezed from the sudsy sun the faucet of quiet waters turned off the aura of a red and white sail on the run and my day’s just begun just wait until the unspooling of the supermoon the sand dunes of midnight dreaminess in the lightly rocking socket infused with Panamanian water lilies whereas my ears leap at the splash of oar-rowed canoes my eyes behold but a shadow of heaven and i almost die right there and then in my dugout i awake to a blue ceiling with stars hazardly close unable to breach the barrier reef i sink into my pillow in stillness asleep 6/25/2019

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Date: 6/28/2019 5:10:00 AM
This imagery wrapped around my heart swiftly and gladly. A FAV for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! :)
Date: 6/28/2019 1:55:00 AM
Such gorgeous imagery. A fave for me
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, dear Andrea! My heart is with you in thoughts and prayers. Hugs :)
Date: 6/27/2019 9:12:00 PM
This dream is so much more vivid than what passes for reality. Intense! Great! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2019 9:46:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 6/27/2019 3:58:00 PM
A dream that evokes such beautiful imagery is always a welcome sight..I enjoyed the read, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2019 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!

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