Cory Long Poet Tanka

Day Dream

Summer days take me away
To another place I would rather be
Quietly  peaceful on the beach
 rocks and cool breeze on my feet
listen to sea gulls fly above me






Carol Brown's contest "It's time for a vacation"
 by cory long

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Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2011 at 12:06 PM I think that would be a wonderful vacation. Congrats on your win!

Jack Horne May 6, 2011 at 1:45 PM Many congrats on your win : )

Gwendolen Song May 6, 2011 at 6:23 AM This is a nice vacation-u must be on the east coast like me----it is 3 hrs to a beach somewhere in Connecticut! You have it perfectly--the sound of sea gulls does bring the vacation idea full circle for me. Have a great weekend, Cory! Gwendolen

Elaine George May 6, 2011 at 3:51 AM Sensational Tanka, Cory. That is my kind of vacation too. You can go any time you like, it doesn't cost a penny and it is always just the way you want it to be. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Nette Onclaud May 5, 2011 at 7:29 PM short piece that says it all, cory... like the mood and cheers for the big win! :) huggs!

John Freeman May 5, 2011 at 6:00 PM Cory,Have fun on the beach, great to see you in the top five. Congratulations on your honored poem's success. Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor May 5, 2011 at 1:28 PM Congrats on your win, Cory. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 5, 2011 at 1:23 PM Congrats Cory on your fantastic win in the vacation contest... with this fine adventure... enjoy your win my friend ..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2011 at 12:51 PM Such a wonderful poem, Cory! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 5, 2011 at 12:07 PM Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, cory

Carol Sunshine Brown May 5, 2011 at 11:39 AM Congratulations Cory on your 5th place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick April 22, 2011 at 4:30 PM Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..So very descriptive almost like being there..Enjoyed reading this eve.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Anne Rutherford April 22, 2011 at 1:08 PM Cory great poem , thats my idea of a summer day. Anne

James Foulk April 22, 2011 at 10:58 AM a great and refreshing piece of poetry.

Gwendolen Song April 22, 2011 at 6:22 AM Hey Cory! nice tanka-this day dreamy poem had me convinced I had sand in between my toes as I listened to the sea gulls too! I bet Carolyn will love this poem! Happy Easter! Gwendolen