Day Dream

Summer days take me away To another place I would rather be Quietly peaceful on the beach rocks and cool breeze on my feet listen to sea gulls fly above me Carol Brown's contest "It's time for a vacation" by cory long

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2011 12:06:00 PM

I think that would be a wonderful vacation. Congrats on your win!

Jack Horne

Date: 5/6/2011 1:45:00 PM

Many congrats on your win : )

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/6/2011 6:23:00 AM

This is a nice vacation-u must be on the east coast like me----it is 3 hrs to a beach somewhere in Connecticut! You have it perfectly--the sound of sea gulls does bring the vacation idea full circle for me. Have a great weekend, Cory! Gwendolen

Elaine George

Date: 5/6/2011 3:51:00 AM

Sensational Tanka, Cory. That is my kind of vacation too. You can go any time you like, it doesn't cost a penny and it is always just the way you want it to be. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2011 7:29:00 PM

short piece that says it all, cory... like the mood and cheers for the big win! :) huggs!

John Freeman

Date: 5/5/2011 6:00:00 PM

Cory,Have fun on the beach, great to see you in the top five. Congratulations on your honored poem's success. Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/5/2011 1:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Cory. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2011 1:23:00 PM

Congrats Cory on your fantastic win in the vacation contest... with this fine adventure... enjoy your win my friend ..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 12:51:00 PM

Such a wonderful poem, Cory! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2011 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, cory

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/5/2011 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations Cory on your 5th place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/22/2011 4:30:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..So very descriptive almost like being there..Enjoyed reading this eve.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Anne Rutherford

Date: 4/22/2011 1:08:00 PM

Cory great poem , thats my idea of a summer day. Anne

James Foulk

Date: 4/22/2011 10:58:00 AM

a great and refreshing piece of poetry.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/22/2011 6:22:00 AM

Hey Cory! nice tanka-this day dreamy poem had me convinced I had sand in between my toes as I listened to the sea gulls too! I bet Carolyn will love this poem! Happy Easter! Gwendolen