Day Complete

Bittersweet a day is complete
Shadows prance, light fades in retreat
A melody plays a song yet unsung
Dreams sashay as the clock chimes one
Glass castles built dare invite a perfect aim
Yet the castle still dances merrily all the same
and therein does remain love so very young
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 14, 2012 at 9:02 PM
KAREN, congrats with your featured poem of the week.. Good night~PD
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February 12, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Nice little rhyming poem that delivers delightful descriptiveness.
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October 12, 2010 at 12:21 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Karen. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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October 12, 2010 at 6:23 AM
Nice creative expressions on the day complete, karen
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