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Day Complete

Bittersweet a day is complete Shadows prance, light fades in retreat A melody plays a song yet unsung Dreams sashay as the clock chimes one Glass castles built dare invite a perfect aim Yet the castle still dances merrily all the same and therein does remain love so very young

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Date: 6/14/2012 9:02:00 PM
KAREN, congrats with your featured poem of the week.. Good night~PD
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Date: 2/12/2011 4:41:00 PM
Nice little rhyming poem that delivers delightful descriptiveness.
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Date: 10/12/2010 12:21:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Karen. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:23:00 AM
Nice creative expressions on the day complete, karen
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