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Day By Day

Waning love is a cold diamond thing The hurt pressure from the thought of losing you is such a hard burden Squeezing the hope out of me Heavy-hearted acceptance ain’t easy, especially when the weeping pang of separation comes prematurely rushing through Day by day, I get premonition pulse signals of distress Diamond bit by bit, I receive this coal crushing feeling And the hurt pressure changes the beauty of what once did exist Your vow of discontentment is tearing us apart Day by day Making our bond weaker every 24/7 ... I do feel a new heartbreak Your ice cold eyes tell me the love flame is no longer lit As your heart becomes more Diamond bit by bit Pointed act of your future departure pierces my mind deeply As this soon-to-be severed heart pleads empty Affectionate feelings voiced are on the decline, your dispassionate vow sound has a hollow golden ring Echoes of neglected conciliatory healing drowns my restless pain in watery sheets of serrated discomfort That jagged sharp sound, thrust hard through my mate severed soul, has a diamond sting An asunder carat cutting my heart in half Broken altar promise darkly coal uttered, portends of your leaving Those sacred two words, once spoken with past caring intensity, are now double troubling ... And “I do” know why that is, because you no longer desire me Keeping your two-folded arm distance is a cold diamond thing As love on the wane wears the bosom hard bling-bling Day by day, my evening pillow dreams get so very misty sigh moist softer Diamond bit by bit, my mourn awakenings get teary pure carbon crystalline

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Date: 11/28/2019 4:12:00 AM
Love the diamond metaphor and the use of pressure to get your point across; from coal to multi-facets to "pure carbon crystalline", the metamorphosis is complete. Well done.
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Date: 11/16/2019 2:35:00 PM
Hello Freddie Robinson, a love that goes wrong does hurt. Have a nice day my friend. Love and Joy. Darlene.
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Date: 11/3/2019 5:56:00 PM
Freddie, this is powerful. You have described that gut wrenching feeling perfectly. I love this!
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Date: 10/31/2019 10:32:00 AM
one can feel the pain through your words...when love grows distant, we can feel it but often are helpless especially if their heart is hard like a diamond... good write Freddie...i love this one...many can relate! hugs
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Date: 10/29/2019 9:35:00 PM
Heartwrenching, that the beauty in the mind of the writer and the desire to hold onto love, is invisible like a diamond frozen in ice....and bling bling is all that counts in the other. I love this poem, R and have added it to my favourites. It is one of your best. L
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