Day Break

Day Break

One day I came home from work
A little early, a little tired
It was my last day.  I was fired.
I called for my wife, “Honey, I’m home!”
She must be bathing

Things looked different in the house
Something had really changed
There was something missing
It was everything including light bulbs
I was getting too old for this

Was it something that I said?
Did she know about my job?
I would like to look into myself into the mirror
To find out who I am and what I've done
But it was gone as well 

Honey left a note taped to the wall
Where a refrigerator had been
It simply read; “Drop dead.”  “I’m leaving you.”
“Thanks for the fun and furniture.”
“It’s time for you to move on too…so…Moving on….Go!”

Created on 9/10/14 for - Moving On – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/10/2014 12:30:00 PM
Clever title, Earl. I love a poem that tells a story well. Yours does just that. Sydney
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Date: 9/10/2014 1:12:00 PM
Hi Sydney, Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. I like to entertain when I can. Poetry does not have to be stuffy and stoic. I enjoy playing with ideas. It is a pleasure to see and read your comments. Thanks again, Have a great day. Take care. Earl
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