Linda Alice Fowler Poet Footle

Day At the Beach

beach day
I play

no turf
go surf

offshore
no oar

ocean
motion

I took
a look

I saw
a maw

sharp teeth
unsheathed

bright white
large bite

shark bait
my fate

I swam
I scrammed

faster
faster

faster
passed her

freestyle
sea mile

achieve
reprieve

ashore
before

dispensed
past tense

some fun
I'm done

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Joanna Daniel January 9, 2022 at 4:19 AM Amazing set of footles, Linda:) enjoyed:) Linda Alice Fowler January 9, 2022 at 6:46 AM Hi Jo. Many thanks for the visit and nice comments to my beach day. :) Linda

Emilia James November 17, 2021 at 3:14 PM Wonderful set of footles Linda. They are one of my favourite forms. Emilia : ) Linda Alice Fowler November 17, 2021 at 4:31 PM Many thanks Emilia. I appreciate the visit and comments. :) L

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 22, 2021 at 3:06 AM Woah a scary fantastic write and i believe this is a real escape from a white shark, cool mod form, adventurous episode woahh! Kudos!! >>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~`¶§ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2021 at 6:09 PM Thank you Zanab. Linda

Simon Hamill October 20, 2021 at 5:21 PM Hi Linda,great footle.especialy for the shark.lol.take care.simon.:-):-) Linda Alice Fowler October 21, 2021 at 8:03 AM Hello Simon. All is well that ends well, eh? Thanks for the read and comment.

L Milton Hankins October 20, 2021 at 3:16 PM Linda, this is absolutely delightful. I enjoyed it so much. Linda Alice Fowler October 21, 2021 at 8:01 AM Hi Milt. Thanks for the visit and nice comments :)

Tom Cunningham October 20, 2021 at 12:56 PM Great footles Linda, they're so addictive once you start.. Hope you are keeping well, haven't seen you for a while. Tom Linda Alice Fowler October 21, 2021 at 8:00 AM Hello Tom. Thank you so much for the kind words. Yes, I've been well, just taking a step back for a while.