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Day At the Beach

beach day I play no turf go surf offshore no oar ocean motion I took a look I saw a maw sharp teeth unsheathed bright white large bite shark bait my fate I swam I scrammed faster faster faster passed her freestyle sea mile achieve reprieve ashore before dispensed past tense some fun I'm done

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/9/2022 4:19:00 AM

Amazing set of footles, Linda:) enjoyed:)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/9/2022 6:46:00 AM

Hi Jo. Many thanks for the visit and nice comments to my beach day. :) Linda

Emilia James

Date: 11/17/2021 3:14:00 PM

Wonderful set of footles Linda. They are one of my favourite forms. Emilia : )

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/17/2021 4:31:00 PM

Many thanks Emilia. I appreciate the visit and comments. :) L

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/22/2021 3:06:00 AM

Woah a scary fantastic write and i believe this is a real escape from a white shark, cool mod form, adventurous episode woahh! Kudos!! >>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~`¶§ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/31/2021 6:09:00 PM

Thank you Zanab. Linda

Simon Hamill

Date: 10/20/2021 5:21:00 PM

Hi Linda,great footle.especialy for the shark.lol.take care.simon.:-):-)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/21/2021 8:03:00 AM

Hello Simon. All is well that ends well, eh? Thanks for the read and comment.