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Day and Night

today is the day
the day turns to night 
its dark out
i see a flash of light 
i walk down the street 
i look at my feet
and there it is
the key to DESTINY!!!

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May 8, 2015 at 9:43 AM

Great but I don't like the ending as much as the rest but i still love it

Ernilando Tugaff

April 4, 2010 at 9:38 AM

Congratualtions on your featured poem. Ernilando

Wallace Michael

March 30, 2010 at 5:46 PM

keep moving my friend- one foot in front of the other, one step @ a time.

Daver Austin

March 30, 2010 at 6:13 AM

Would be interesting to know what you found beyond the key. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 29, 2010 at 5:28 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Brandon. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

March 28, 2010 at 12:57 PM

Congrats on the featured poem this week!! Enjoyed reading!!

Bill Frew

March 22, 2010 at 5:35 PM

Very good write, thanx!

Faleshia Murphy

March 22, 2010 at 3:41 PM

VERY NICE LOVED IT FALESHIA

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 22, 2010 at 12:19 PM

I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Brandon. Love, Carol