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Day and Night

today is the day the day turns to night its dark out i see a flash of light i walk down the street i look at my feet and there it is the key to DESTINY!!!

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Date: 5/8/2015 9:43:00 AM

Great but I don't like the ending as much as the rest but i still love it

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/4/2010 9:38:00 AM

Congratualtions on your featured poem. Ernilando

Wallace Michael

Date: 3/30/2010 5:46:00 PM

keep moving my friend- one foot in front of the other, one step @ a time.

Daver Austin

Date: 3/30/2010 6:13:00 AM

Would be interesting to know what you found beyond the key. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2010 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Brandon. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/28/2010 12:57:00 PM

Congrats on the featured poem this week!! Enjoyed reading!!

Bill Frew

Date: 3/22/2010 5:35:00 PM

Very good write, thanx!

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/22/2010 3:41:00 PM

VERY NICE LOVED IT FALESHIA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/22/2010 12:19:00 PM

I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Brandon. Love, Carol

Courtney Hallett

Date: 3/22/2010 7:50:00 AM

I like this!! keep it up!!! I can't wait to read more!!! -Courtney-

Bathsheba Bathsheba

Date: 3/22/2010 6:51:00 AM

Like it Brandon - Fab share -:)