Day and Night

The sun and the moon are like the eyes of god,
Always watching over us day and night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dorelien Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 4:16 AM
I would say yes and no, because i have one similiar to what your saying about stars. I will post it up for you.
Martin Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 10:29 PM
Interesting piece. If the the moon and the sun are the eyes of the god's, are the stars the eyes of the angels?
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