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Day and Night

As the sun sinks behind another day, the veil of night will have her say. The moon shines bright on a shimmering lake, a nocturnal kingdom will soon awake. The wise old owl speaks his words, while sounds of darkness are all that's heard. Truth hides in shadows where starlight shines, colors are lost to a world that's blind. Dew blankets the ground as fog fills the air, the pathway you know is now a snare. The wind turns cold in hours so deep, dreams dance in the minds of those who sleep. When sunlight breaks the night creeps away, a morning brings hope of a brand new day. 12/11/18

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Date: 11/15/2021 1:48:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading this poem, nicely written
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Date: 11/14/2021 8:31:00 AM
Love it, Wren! ...Fran
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Date: 2/6/2019 5:03:00 AM
stunning
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Date: 12/24/2018 10:01:00 AM
Beautifully done, Wren. Just lovely! ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/18/2018 11:07:00 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/18/2018 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Funom for your kind comments my friend.
Date: 12/13/2018 6:36:00 PM
Wren, enjoyed this great flow and imagery of winter... Have a very Merry Christmas
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/13/2018 6:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve! You have a Merry Christmas as well.
Date: 12/11/2018 8:06:00 PM
"The wise old owl speaks his words, while sounds of darkness are all that's heard." - my favorite part, because I love owls. I can "feel" the reverent silence.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/11/2018 8:11:00 PM
I like owls as well, I think they're a hoot! Thanks for the visit Caren.
Date: 12/11/2018 6:33:00 PM
"a nocturnal kingdom will soon awake" love the imagery! :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/11/2018 6:56:00 PM
Thank you p.s.

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