Day After Christmas

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Yes, it’s all too regular, this kind of setting--- the language of rooms exposing littered notes along slit wrappers gone wild: oh half-asleep kids still run amuck over marathons of toy games igniting lithesome squeaks through comedy and banter… And when near evening pleads for flavorful remnants --baked ham, chowder soup-- this day after Christmas becomes a world that gives and takes a refrain from soothing drawls, on to the gratitude of hours passing heaves of joy... ~*~ 12/26/2016 For Anthony Slausen The Day After Christmas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/2/2017 6:43:00 PM
Congrats!!! nette...I still have mine lying around lol...god bless and have a great New Year...^WW^
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Date: 1/2/2017 4:47:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your fine win! Well done. And, Happy New Year to you! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2017 1:46:00 PM
Nette, a warm, loving, and comforting poem. : )
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Date: 1/2/2017 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette. I enjoyed reading this, Kai
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Date: 1/1/2017 4:40:00 PM
Brings back memories! Great poetry! Congrats Nette! :-)
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Date: 12/31/2016 11:52:00 PM
Your poetry is one feast of imagery, from start to finish, and I am always awed.... Congratulations on your placement, and Happy New Year :)
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Date: 12/26/2016 4:09:00 PM
Your poetry just takes my breath away always. Your word and phrase choices are so beautifully crafted and expressed, Your mind thinks in the most gorgeous fashion, you express yourself in a form that touches any and all who read you. You are an amazing talent Nette.
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Date: 12/26/2016 3:09:00 AM
Day after Christmas well painted in words so fine dear, nette! A seven.
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Date: 12/25/2016 9:42:00 PM
your words are so inspiring with so much love.... Merry Christmas and good luck in the contest in which it is a winner already
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Date: 12/25/2016 7:45:00 PM
Love it!
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Date: 12/25/2016 4:24:00 PM
A lovely Christmas poem, when I was a child I always was sad when all the wrapping paper was cleaned up, it was like taking away all the "excitement" hugs!!
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Date: 12/25/2016 3:30:00 PM
Oh this is so lovely Nette. I hope it does really well. Merry Christmas! 7 ; )
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Date: 12/25/2016 2:37:00 PM
I know the feeling well but never put it to heart! You have connected with the spirit of this season and expressed the timelessness of love with such endearment, as the quality of your poem is heartwarming, outstanding!
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Date: 12/25/2016 2:25:00 PM
Oh yes, this excellent poem brings to life the afterglow of Christmas --mess and warm love combined the morning after.
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