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Day-Dreaming

"Day-dreaming" As i lay upon this sand Beneath the light of sun I walk within the midst of clouds Only to touch,not even but one I see the riseing cliffs And the forest in loom beyond, The lakes of sparkling waters That reflect the mornings dawned I spy the grounds below, And the sand on which I lie For to this place I must return Again to hover,amid these museful skies... ps i just wanted to try and write something greeting card-ish.it is kinda fun...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/22/2010 9:50:00 PM
Very beautiful scene u set Gary.. and have painted in your words.. I luv the beach.. am on the Amalfi Coast with my new hubby in Italy so the beach is wonderful here.. enjoyed your creativity tonight luv.. ciao..
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Date: 8/22/2010 9:18:00 AM
very well written,it was enjoyable to read
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:07:00 AM
great write my friend... very enjoyed..Michael
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