Dawn's Rose

Dawn’s Rose

Love, like delicate petals of the dawning rose,
Kiss me – wake me from my grey midnight dreaming
Hold me before first light of day transposes
The breath of moonlight’s silver shadows teeming.

Tenderly, as the soft colors of the rose, caress me
Brush away the thorns protecting my trembling heart
Cast off this spiny sheath of tears so I may see
Blossoms open - the ecstasy you impart.

In tender embraces, like rose fire, ignite me
With winsome touch rouse from sleep cherished blooms
Trace your fingertips along my bursting seeds
Rejoicing for dawn’s moments in the rose’ cocoon.

Then like the fragrance lingering in this precious rose
Like the rapture tinged with love’s perfume
Leave your scent in the perfumed afterglow
That slowly fades in amber morning’s bloom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 8:24 PM
#3 on top 100 new poems! Way to write, Sam. This poem is pure poetry, each line poetic, a poem embraceable in any decade and any working heart. The imagery and phrasing touch and hold. Just beautiful, Sam.
Kauffman Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 8:09 PM
CayCay, I am deeply honored by your beautiful feedback. Never thought about this poem in those terms but I am truly grateful for your words. I am embarrassed to say that I forget about checking this list! This placement is a wonderful surprise. Hope all is well. Sending you blessings!
Valles Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 3:34 PM
Sam, what beautiful, romantic and vivid imagery. A fave!
Kauffman Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 8:02 PM
Tom, thank you. Just saw your wonderful feedback. Sigh. Have to admit this is one of my favorites. It was fun to write. Hope you are well. Blessings to you!
George Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 5:53 AM
"Leave your scent in the perfumed afterglow That slowly fades in amber morning’s bloom." So very passionate and intensely romantic. The love compared to a blossoming rose here has all the charm and fragrance of that exotic flower. Beautiful and sensuous! Sending you love and light, dear Sam.
Kauffman Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 12:31 PM
Dearest Valsa, I am always encouraged and inspired when I read your beautiful messages. Thank you! This poem was a joy to write and dwell on the fragrance and magic of love awakening. The perfume of love truly lingers in an afterglow to savor. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings of joy and inspiration!
Radice Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 11:24 PM
Deep passionate romance and a reverence for the natural world combine beautifully here Sam. I'll add that that is one heck of an opening line too. Cheers - Gary
Kauffman Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 12:25 PM
Hi Gary! Many thanks for your wonderful message. I, too, really like that opening line. Love, awakening, is a precious and beautiful experience - one to treasure. Thank you so much reading. I am honored and it is always a delight to hear from you! Cheers, blessings and inspiration to you!
Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 8:21 PM
Lovely, Sam!! Such a sweet poem, can take us away - <3
Kauffman Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 12:20 PM
Thank you so much, Paige! Such a fun contest with so many romantic entries. This placement is an honor. Blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 3:32 PM
Precious and romantic poem, Sam. I wish he used standard contest. I am seeing so many wonderful love poems.
Kauffman Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 12:19 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. It was fun to write a romantic poem again. Sending you all the best in blessings!
Anaya Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 4:30 PM
In loves embrace, Romanticism indeed! Secure in love, great read, Sam. April blessings xX
Kauffman Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 11:42 AM
Anaya, thank you! I was hoping that this would be an example of romanticism. So grateful for your feedback! Sending you blessings of spring joy!
Cunningham Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 3:39 PM
Stunning imagery Sam, I can smell the fragrance of that beautiful rose at dawn. Hope you're keeping well. Over Fork Over. Tom
Kauffman Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 11:38 AM
Many thanks, Tom. This is such a wonderful, positive contest theme. There is definitely a lovely fragrance to romance and love! Hope you are well. Over Fork Over!
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