Tim Smith Poet Light Verse

Dawn's Gift

Dans l'aube de ma journée, je vous vois
floating along-side my quiet slumber
resurrecting visions that reside
in the stillness of my breath 
as I await the rising sun
Peaceful rays of love lie down
within a lemongrass fragrant breeze
tap gentle on a probing heart
and soothe dawn's gift of golden light

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Sneha Rv May 17, 2017 at 7:54 AM Oh this is so beautiful! How amazingly you can use every form...

Lisa Ricci May 16, 2017 at 1:48 PM And a glorious gift it is. Hello Tim. Your words tone and voice match perfectly this moment in time. Dawn and just before dawn is my favorite time when everything is so peaceful and quiet. Your entry gives peace and imagery. We readers thank you. Enjoy the night. Well done

Anne-Lise Andresen May 16, 2017 at 6:49 AM - This is a small golden pearl, Tim :) # 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 15, 2017 at 10:01 PM Tim, c'est un très beau poème romantique. The first line beautifully sets off your poem:) Amitiés

Chris Green May 15, 2017 at 6:14 AM Absolutely beautiful Tim. This is a nice one to wake up to.

Darren White May 15, 2017 at 1:57 AM On aime cette première ligne. Elle est belle :) It is right before waking, those very vivid and lively memories and dreams. Beautiful poem my friend

Connie Marcum Wong May 14, 2017 at 10:12 PM J’adore ce beau poème Tim! It lights the day with a romantic hue! Lovely! 7 ; )

Etienne Lariviere May 14, 2017 at 10:07 PM Comme les esprits

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2017 at 7:39 PM wow, so beautiful and with that bit of french thrown in , very romantic. Loved the lemongrass in there too.

Eve Roper May 14, 2017 at 7:22 PM Very stunning poem, Tim, ~*

Nette Onclaud May 14, 2017 at 5:46 PM you light my morning, tim.. huggs

Arthur Vaso May 14, 2017 at 4:47 PM I beautiful poem to the start of a new day! :)

Sara Ella May 14, 2017 at 4:28 PM A peaceful, soothing poem :) I love this Tim. <3

Charmaine Chircop May 14, 2017 at 2:30 PM So lovely to read your french line..and the rest of your wonderful poem.Tres Jolie Mon ami.

Jan Allison May 14, 2017 at 2:07 PM oh wow Tim such beautiful soothing lines so lovely to see your romantic poems again:-) hugs Jan xx