Dawn's Gift

Dans l'aube de ma journée, je vous vois floating along-side my quiet slumber resurrecting visions that reside in the stillness of my breath as I await the rising sun Peaceful rays of love lie down within a lemongrass fragrant breeze tap gentle on a probing heart and soothe dawn's gift of golden light

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Sneha Rv

Date: 5/17/2017 7:54:00 AM

Oh this is so beautiful! How amazingly you can use every form...

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/16/2017 1:48:00 PM

And a glorious gift it is. Hello Tim. Your words tone and voice match perfectly this moment in time. Dawn and just before dawn is my favorite time when everything is so peaceful and quiet. Your entry gives peace and imagery. We readers thank you. Enjoy the night. Well done

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2017 6:49:00 AM

- This is a small golden pearl, Tim :) # 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/15/2017 10:01:00 PM

Tim, c'est un très beau poème romantique. The first line beautifully sets off your poem:) Amitiés

Chris Green

Date: 5/15/2017 6:14:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Tim. This is a nice one to wake up to.

Darren White

Date: 5/15/2017 1:57:00 AM

On aime cette première ligne. Elle est belle :) It is right before waking, those very vivid and lively memories and dreams. Beautiful poem my friend